Samples Band 9

IELTS Discussion Writing Samples Band 9

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Nowadays, there are many reasons environmental pollution. What are causes and solution?

It is incontrovertible that recent years have seen an immense amount of deteriorating conditions of environs -- which has been mainly caused by human activities, and there are many remedies that authorities can make it possible to ameliorate habitat health. Notwithstanding, this disquisition will delve the causes behind this unforeseen occurrence, and subsequently will put forward the panacea to arresting this menace.

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Some people believe that technology has made men more sociable, and others think that it has made us less sociable.Discuss both views?

Many people think that the development of technology made individuals, especially men, are more outgoing, whilst others say that it encourages people to be less outgoing. This essay will discuss both perspectives.

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Some of the people believe that video games are useful for children while others say these games have harmful effects. Discuss both views

Some people say that virtual games are worthwhile for kids, whilst others say that they can cause negative effects. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people think that the media (newspapers ) have the right to publish details of people's private lives, while other think it should be controlled. discuss both views.

It is considered by a certain populace that news publishers have the authority to print details about private matters. While others who take a contrarian view, believe that that this should be kept under control. The discussion of both these views is worthwhile.

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You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Education is the backbone of any country, and in most countries, It is the private school system which is doing the heavy lifting. Although, I am of a belief that schooling should be free, thus funding public schools should be promoted, I understand the importance of private schools and support its funding too. This essay will further discuss this position.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, Even though we have an advance mechanism and technology in farming, many people go to the bed with an empty stomach globally due to many reasons. In this essay, I will provide the causes of such type of situation and some major steps to solve it.

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Nowadays, more and more older people compete with younger people for the same jobs. what are the reasons for this? what would you suggest as a solution?

It is true that competition is a significant attitude in a workplace which is more prevalent among young and old employees these days. This essay will discuss the causes and the measures in order to solve this problem.

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Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together while others think that people and communities are becoming more isolated. Discuss both sides

Emerging technologies like the internet has made mankind's life easier. It is argued that the net plays a crucial role in holding loved ones together, whereas this booming technology has been held responsible for increasing distance among the human kind. This essay will elucidate both the views.

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People are having more and more sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons? What are the solutions to make people drink less?

Today, people will consume more fountain drinks and sugary beverages than ever before, which has increased obesity and related health problems among the population of the nations around the world. This essay will discuss the major causes of the trend and suggest possible solutions.

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Nowadays, people have developed poor eating habits and do not eat balanced diet. What are the reasons behind this? Suggest possible solutions to control this.

These days people are not following a proper diet plan and their pattern of food intake is erratic. There are multiple reasons for this, budget constraints and busy lifestyle being the most important. This can be mended by taking the meals at a proper time and avoiding junk foods.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. what are the reasons for this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

People nowadays, love to live an extravagant lifestyle, though they aren't capable of doing such thing. Eventually, they get into financial risks of paying high debts. In this essay, we will briefly go through about relevant attributes, and take some preventive measures.

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If you could make two changes in the educational system of your country, what aspects would you change? Support your ideas with reasons and examples and discuss how the changes you suggest would improve the system.

Educational systems, all around the globe, have proven through history to be problematic, regarding their efficiency and productivity. But, some minor changes to these, could help improve their effect on students. In this write up I will suggest two changes and how these would profit the curriculum.

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People are less fit and active nowadays than in the past. What are the reasons for this? What measures can be taken to fix this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relavent examples from your own knowledge and experience

These days, physical fitness among all human beings is one of the major concerns. In this essay, I will discuss some reasons and their solutions for this issue. Firstly, I will discuss how a busy lifestyle affects the activeness of a person and secondly, I will explore how technology makes an impact on this, and solutions for these problems.

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It is generally accepted that families are not as close as they use to be. Give some reasons why this change has happened and suggest how families could be brought closer together. Include any relevant examples from your experience.

With the advancement of the technology has certainly revolutionized many sectors. This will lead to the diversity in the social connection with the peer member of the family. The essay will discuss causes for this change and measures that are taken to make stronger bond; are discussed in below paragraphs.

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries . Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

It is true that nowadays the juvenile delinquency has become a topical issue which increases progressively around the globe. The unstable family life and repeated exposure to violence are the root causes of this phenomenon; however, there are many measures that can be taken to tackle this problem.

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The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries . Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.

It is true that nowadays the number of juvenile delinquency is progressively set on the rise around the globe. Broken families and drug and alcohol abuse are the root causes of this phenomenon; however, there are many measures that can be taken to tackle this problem.

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The main purpose of public libraries is to provide books, and they should not waste their limited resources and space on providing expensive hi-tech media such as computer software, videos and DVDs. Discuss both views with example.

The 20th century has come along with numerous developments such as the digitization, IT revolution and the internet, and these phenomena have upgraded the educational support system such as libraries. Traditionally, the libraries used to keep the books, but now due to lightening-fast internet services modern libraries have more multimedia resources namely, CDs, DVDs and computers. Some critics assert that books should be the primary source of knowledge in the libraries, whereas the others believe that they should be equipped with laptops and computer devices. The essay will discuss both these aspects followed by a conclusion.

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Why are some people who leave school early more successful compared with those who complete their studies. Provide reasons why they are more successful and what are the requirements for success?

It is often believed that individuals who left their early academics from universities are more prosperous and popular whereas others ended up with skilled jobs and business by finishing their studies from educational institutions. This essay will discuss the reasons behind the victorious people with less qualifications followed by the required steps in order to gain a successful life.

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Many animals are being hunted to the brink of extinction in order to fulfill the demand and greed of mankind for decorative purposes as well as for other reasons, such as traditional medicine. How can this issue be tackled?

Human life is dependent on the animals. But, human beings have put many animal species in danger of becoming extinct with the unchecked and extensive hunting for its selfish motives such as house decorations, pleasure etc. It is very important to protect the animals and some measures for this cause must be taken.

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Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Discuss both views?

Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about what students should pursue after finishing high school. While some people believe that entering a university or college will guarantee a successful career in the future, others state that working right after school is a better option. This essay will discuss these two opinions.

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