Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.
Traffic congestion and nobody will want to buy private cars. People will use local transport for
pollution
have become global issues. However
, it is possible to control these problems by escalating the cost of fuel. I totally agree with this
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