Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Traffic congestion and
pollution
have become global issues.
However
, it is possible to control these problems by escalating the cost of fuel. I totally agree with
this
because
e
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conomy is a factor which
influence
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influences

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the most in many situations There are many benefits
of
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to

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raising rates of petrol.
Firstly
, due to
h
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the

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igh rates
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,

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nobody will want to buy private cars. People will use local transport for
long distance
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long-distance

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such
as buses ,trains, ship or
air planes
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aeroplanes

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, and short distance will be covered by bicycle.
This
will help a lot in declining traffic burden, daily accidents and noise
pollution
.
Occurrence
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The occurrence

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of
a
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the
an

The noun phrase accident seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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ccident will decrease ,due to high prices
less
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fewer

It appears that the quantifier less does not fit with the countable noun automobiles. Consider changing the quantifier or the noun.

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automobiles will be
on road
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on-road

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and there will be easy for
g
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the

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overnment to control accidents and mishaps on roads.
Secondly
, contamination of
e
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the

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nvironment with impurities will be minimized by setting up high prices of vehicle oils. Due to
u
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the

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se of less fuel ,the emission of carbon monoxide will be reduced. Environment Defence Fund estimates that on-road vehicles are the cause of one-
third
of the air
pollution
.
Therefore
, we have to take
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a

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ew steps to combat
this
,
otherwise
, we will pay
h
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a

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uge amount.
Everyday
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Every day

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approximately 200 tons of impurities in just 12 square meter is noted.
Number
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The number

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of patient of
r
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the

The noun phrase respiratory track seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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espiratory track has increased due to uncontrolled gases emitted from road vehicles. To conclude, it is recommended that government should
rise
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raise

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the price of fuel to get rid of all problems caused by traffic and there must be proper rules and regulation regarding
n
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the

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umber of cars and
pollution
on
r
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the

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Answer the 'Problem and Solution' topic

Problem-and-solution essays fall naturally into two parts, the first describing and exploring the problem, the second setting out the solution or solutions.

You essay structure should look something like this:

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – Problems
  • Body paragraph 2 – Solutions
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • One of the first problems of the...
  • Another problem that needs to be considered...
  • A possible solution to this problem would be...
  • One immediate practical solution is to...

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