Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Over the
last
century, our cities faced unprecedented growth of traffic congestion and as
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esult of
this
, we encounter a litany of environmental pollutions. Some experts believe that
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rising cost of
petrol
is the best way to tackle these problems. I firmly believe that there is a defensible basis for
this
argument. In
this
essay, some other possible solutions will be elaborated. The proponents of
this
view claim that recent studies have shown that due to increasing the
price
of
petrol
, the
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of
this
energy
has dramatically decreased. As
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esult of
this
, the wide demand
of
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petrol
has slumped. The key point to justify
this
attitude could be illustrated by a tangible example. Our country “Iran” has a high reputation for having oil resources.
Consequently
, the
price
of
the
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petrol
was not justified
by comparison
with another country. To cut a long story short, after applying
this
idea in cities, the evidence has shown most of the people turn to some Alternatives
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private car.
For example
, by the time went on, the rising
price
of
petrol
has caused majority the people use much more public transportation rather than the past. Alternatively, there are other possible solutions to address
this
issue.
First
and foremost, the governments should give special care to renewable
energy
such
as
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water, wind, solar
energy
and etc.
Also
, they should encourage people to use public transportation
such
as electric tram, metro, bus and etc.
Last
but not least, we should own up to the fact that we need cultural reconstruction about the true understanding of
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nergy crisis on our planet. In conclusion, from what has been discussed above, increasing the
price
of
petrol
can be an effective factor to reduce consumption of
this
energy
, at least in my country. Serious measures should be taken by government and individuals as a duty for solving these problems.
Also
, the government must assume responsibility, stop passing the bulk and settle down the effective laws
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control
this
issue.
Finally
, it is absolutely imperative we should not try to be wise after the events.
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