A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research.

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cosystem, and exploitation of these creatures will lead to
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mbalance in nature, as they reduce in
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ame rights as humans.
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and using them for consumption and research leads to scarcity of
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they too have equal
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to live. In my opinion,
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should not be exploited by
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since they too have the
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to live.
Animals
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should be given equal importance as humans, we can find industries producing commercial goods made of animal products.
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and belts are found to be made of animal skin, which
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arge population irrespective of gender.
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they are bought from
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, most of the products are clinically tested on
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in laboratories in order to prove that they can use it safely.
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, humans consume most of the animal meat which leads to killing of
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to satisfy human hunger. All these have resulted in
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eduction of animal species and some are at their extinction. Some
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think
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animals
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are meant to
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their various needs as they are easily
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, parties are incomplete without non-vegetarian diet, and high society
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use expensive e accessories made of animal products, all these are matters of prestige which are fulfilled at cost of animal life and important for them to maintain their standard.
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reedom and equal
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to live their life along with their families and should not be exploited by
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. In short,
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ight to live according to their will so we have no
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to mistreat or kill them.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exploitation
  • Animal welfare
  • Ethical treatment
  • Vegetarianism
  • Veganism
  • Cognitive dissonance
  • Humane
  • Live stock
  • Cruelty-free
  • Bioethics
  • Conservation
  • Habitat preservation
  • Ecosystem
  • Biodiversity
  • Animal testing
  • Synthetic biology
  • Genetic engineering
  • Speciesism
  • Animal husbandry
  • Sustainable farming
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