In many countries the level of crime is increasing and crimes are becoming more violent. Why do you think this is and what can be done about it?

Nowadays undoubtedly crimes are increasing more as compared to the past in both developing and developed countries. Many of the

people

want to live in a secure environment and they want to spend their lives peacefully,

therefore

most of the population of developing countries want to migrate to developed countries for the good quality of life. I will share my views about

this

topic and will

also

give some opinions. Every country has laws and regulations, but

people

those who are living in a country not importantly follow all laws. Every individual is different and if they

follows

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the laws they can live happily and peacefully. Sometime situation become worsts due to which a person become a criminal;

firstly

, unemployment is one of the major

issue

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issues

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, because of frustration lots of

people

become thief, trying to harm other

people

. Due to overcrowding

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,

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the job opportunities are declining remarkably.

Secondly

, Illiteracy; we can see that in most of

the poor areas peoples

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the peoples of the poor area

the peoples of the poor areas

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are uneducated and

also

they didn’t get exposure with the good environment

,

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if someone

pressurize

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pressurizes

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them they get involved in those kinds of activities that are really become dangerous for

people

.

Government

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The government

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have to support the

people

and they

also

have to arrange some kind of seminars or provide teaching sessions in the areas where

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most

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mostly

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most

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people

are uneducated. They have to arrange

such

kind of things because of which

people

can get encouragement.

Thirdly

, the major issue is inequality.

People

those are rich they are respectful. Poor

people

always get ignored in many situations. There should be

the

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apply

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equal rights for the

people

so that everybody

get

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gets

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e

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an

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qual chance to enjoy and live their life happily. To sum up, there are lots of reasons

of

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for

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the criminal activities. Nobody is born criminal but situations due to which

people

get forced to do crimes like financial crisis, expenses, illiteracy, inequality etc.

in my opinion

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, in my opinion,

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it is the responsibility of the government to estimate which is the most occurring reason of crime and try to reduce it for sake of peoples.