Some say that rich countries should help poor countries with food and education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience
The noun phrase support seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
It appears that well developed is missing a hyphen. Consider adding the hyphen(s).
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma before the dependent clause marker so that. Consider removing the comma.
It appears that an article is missing before the word government. Consider adding the article.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase In poor countries. Consider adding a comma.
The spelling of favor is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
The singular countable noun country follows the quantifier one of, which requires a plural noun. Consider using a plural noun or a different quantifier.
The noun phrase richest country seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.
The singular verb form is does not seem to agree with the plural subject good health facilities. Consider changing the verb form.
It appears that the singular verb is does not agree with the plural compound subject unemployment and poverty. Consider changing the verb to the plural form.
It appears that an article is missing before the word past. Consider adding the article.
The determiner that may be incorrect in this context. Consider changing it.
It appears that there is a missing preposition after the word strategies. Consider adding the preposition.
It appears that the phrase a richest countries does not contain the correct article usage. Consider making a change.
It appears that you have an unnecessary comma after the subordinating conjunction because. Consider removing the comma.
Include an introduction and conclusion
A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.
The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.
The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:
- Restatement of thesis
- Prediction or recommendation
To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.
Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:
- In conclusion
- To conclude
- To summarize
- In a nutshell
- In general
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