Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

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Nowadays

people

don’t have much time to spend on reading

newspaper

, so they mostly try to find the easiest way to get up -to -date. Obviously

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nternet is playing

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ital role in

people

lives to get all kind of

news

faster and in

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asier way. But

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ewspaper will be always valuable because mostly older generations like to read

news

from

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ewspaper. If we can take an example of our new generation, they

seems

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too much busy in studying and doing

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ob, so probably they can’t prefer to read

news

from

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ewspaper; but

people

those who are habitual to read

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ewspaper daily especially, our

elders

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grandfather and grandmother they can’t become convinced to see

news

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nternet and most of our elder usually don’t know how to use computer, laptops and mobile phones.

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, newspapers would be always available if you missed

to read

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any information but if you prefer to see online

news

from

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nternet so couldn’t find that

news

again or you will find incomplete information.

Additionally

, newspapers are now

also

available in the form of magazines and source of entertainment

such

as crosswords and puzzles,

these kind

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of activities attract

people

and refresh their minds.

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, in

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ibrary you can see magazines and

newspaper

are always there for reading, so definitely there will be any reason for it! Many

people

think that reading

newspaper

improve

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their communication skill as well as they learn new vocabulary. In schools, teachers

also

involve children to find out different things from newspapers and magazines depend on the topic assigned. To sum up, no doubt

newspaper

are

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mportant source to get updated

news

for

people

and it will never

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up. Technology use

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people

if they prefer to update themselves by using

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its

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their choice.

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