Some people think that the teenager’s years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

There are different stages of

life

. Most

people

enjoyed as a

teenager

and many of the

people

likes

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their

adult

life

.

Teenager

life

is totally different from

adult

life

, both have different taste. Many

people

have

a

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the

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ssumption that

teenager

lives bring more happiness, on another hand the concept is totally different some

of

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p

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eople consider

adult

life

happier. I will discuss both

point

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points

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of views and give my opinion. Those who believe teenage years are happiest for

people

because parents are always there for support, dependency

make

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them strong enough to deal with the difficulties example

,

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if a

teenager

get

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ill

then

a mother or father will support to get off from school or college. At the

time

of teenage the main focus is on studies and whenever possible they can spend

time

with friends and relatives. Socialization is more at the

time

of teenage years.

However

, when

teenager

become

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an adolescent

then

they have

z

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eal to achieve

g

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the

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oal. Confidence

make

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them independent and they start hunting

part

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part-time

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time

job to become responsible. They mostly involved in studies, social gathering as well as finding

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ob to get experience which will be beneficial for them in future. On another hand,

people

who believe

adult

life

bring

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most of the happiness,

firstly

responsibility is a major factor. At the

adult

stage self-confidence and self-satisfaction are two important factors that bring happiness to a

person

.

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is able to support his family and parents and always well focused on his goal. When an

adult

person

become

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capable of fulfilling all needs of their families

then

he considered himself the happiest

person

. In my opinion, both stages are different. It always

depend

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how

person

tackle

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d

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ifferent situation and feel happy. A

teenager

life

is not as complicated as

compare

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to the

adult

person

. When an

adult

person

become older at that

time

life

show different situations. So it always

depend

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on priorities by which a

person

feel happy.