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Many people expect that the proportion of old people will be more than the young people in future. Do you think it is positive or negative?

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There are more young
people
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 than elderly
people
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 in our
society
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 at present.
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, many
people
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 expect the proportion of old
people
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 to be more than young
people
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 in the future.
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 essay will discuss why having more elderly
people
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 than young ones in the future is a disadvantage. The world’s current census says that 40
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 of
the worlds population
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the world's population
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 are over 60 years old.
People
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 in
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 age bracket are termed old. There are benefits to having
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 set of
people
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 in our
society
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. The most important benefit they bring is their experience in various facets of life. Having more old
people
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 in
society
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 will bring about a more informed and knowledgeable
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.
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 will impact positively on societal activities
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 as elections and in educational institutions.
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 in the
last
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 elections held, the proportion of youths who had voters cards were less than older
people
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.
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, the disadvantages of having more old
people
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 than young ones outweigh the advantages.
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,
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society
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 will become a dependent
society
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.
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 will put a lot of stress in the economy. Since more jobs are tailored for younger
people
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, there will be
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indivisuals
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individuals
 to fill
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 roles. At the same time
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the government will have to pay more pensions.
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, the total budget for pensions in the year 2019 was more than half the total salaries paid to government workers in that same year. In conclusion, having an experienced and knowledgeable
society
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 in form of old
people
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 is a good thing.
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, the disadvantage of having a dependent
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 outweighs
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 benefits.
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