Computers are an essential feature of modern education. Some people believe that certain subjects, such as mathematics, are better taught using computers. Others, however, think that there are aspects of education in which computer use is inadequate. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words

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are more essential

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which

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cannot leave without technology because they

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everyday life to

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to check bank account, retail or apply for jobs or studying. In my opinion

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all the ages using

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for researching or

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want to study in certain subjects like mathematics or travel and tourism. I think using

computers

is necessary because obviously

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you will need

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study not only in a certain subject but major subjects like engineering or English or business. I think that every

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of your education need

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not insufficient. I think

computers

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use

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certain subjects but you can

use

to contact with your friends and families or you can

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to write your essays or you can

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for to watch movies or buying things online in

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or amazon. You can

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for download

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ictionary or playing games.

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all the

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using

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even

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elderly

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, younger

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and children. All the exams in

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in Maths, English and science which is the

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is the key feature in up to date education. The past papers in

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which is essential to practice before your real exams. (206 words)

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?