Being a celebrity – such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?
Nowadays, many people try to follow by trends created by
celebrity
. Some people believe that is
beneficially
for them. Suggestion
beneficial
However
, others believe that may bring more problems in their life than positives. Thus
, there are several advantages and there are several disadvantages to follow by celebrity
trends.
There are several benefits about famous people may bring to society. Many people believe that celebrity
lives are important for them. In addition
, they believe that may create some abilities such
as samples how they achieved which may help to
other. Some people believe that famous people give them many ideas to live with others and they do not feel alone. Suggestion
with
in
For example
, many famous celebrities are providing blogs on the internet where they write their own dairy
to show their story and private life to others. a daily written record of (usually personal) experiences and observations
diary
Thus
, there are several advantages begins with famous people.
However
, there are several negatives which may be from celebrities. Many people believe that famous people may show to the public, not true live
which usually is have a great affection or liking for
love
makeup
. They believe that may create misunderstanding and some social problems. Some people believe that celebrities cannot give a good live sample which may be showing off to increase their popularity. Suggestion
make up
For example
, many rich celebrities organize expansive parties where people can come and meet them and experience how to be rich and famous. Thus
, there are several disadvantages of being from famous people.
In conclusion, celebrities create new trends and people feelings. They may share some good values with others
Accept comma addition
others, such
such
as make people feel to belong to some social group. However
, some celebrity
may make misunderstanding in a society which may increase they unhappy.
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