Animals are becoming exist due to human activities on land and in sea. Why has this happen? What’s the solution?

It is true that the rapid development of different industries has destroyed wildlife habitat and a variety of animal

species

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are on the verge of

extinction

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.

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is deeply

negetaive

characterized by or displaying negation or denial or opposition or resistance; having no positive features

negative

consequences due to human activities which has been placing profound impacts on animal life. There are several causes which lead to the

extinction

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of

species

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on land and in the sea.

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, what

has been doing

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has been done

on land is the area of forest was narrowed by the development of construction.

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means that the natural habitat was damaged, no space for animal’s living, leading to the decrease of a numerous of

species

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. It has

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degraded ecosystems and threaten some

species

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with

extinction

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.

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, the industrialization

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has

serious impacts, causing water pollution and

extinction

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of

species

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.

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heavy

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Heavy

industries

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as steel factories, discharged and dumped tons of waste into the sea without a discharge permit, polluted the ocean and posed

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a threat

threats

to the balance of

marine ecosystem

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marine ecosystems

the marine ecosystem

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For

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instance

, tons of marine animals

was killed

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were killed

and died by untreated sewage from

Fomosa

an island in southeastern Asia 100 miles off the coast of mainland China in the South China Sea

Formosa

steel factory in Quang Tri province in Viet Nam. To prevent the

extinction

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of animal, there are several measures which can be taken to solve these issues. One of

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could be that protecting and restoring the natural environment on which many endangered

species

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depend for their survival.

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, experts

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construction field should develop their projects vertically

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of horizontally and do not encroach on forest land.

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, national and local authorities must introduce more campaigns to raise public awareness about the role of wildlife in human life.

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, national governments must enact strict law to punish and prevent illegal activities which destroy and threaten natural environment,

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animal traffickers. In conclusion, the

extinction

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of

species

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result

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results

in many issues which can call for possible solutions to be adopted.