A letter to your friend travelling overseas. You are staying at their apartment and there was a storm. Tell your friend about the storm. Tell them what got damaged Details what repairs to be done.

Dear Smith, I hope that you are keeping well. I’m sorry that I couldn’t write back to your letter before as you might be knowing that a wind
storm
has hit a few days back and it was
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far too dangerous than it was thought of. I’ve been staying at your place for more than a week now and before the
storm
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it was all going pretty awesome.
However
,
this
storm
has made most of the
travelers
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journey
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miserable. The
storm
stroke us at a speed of 100km/hr. It is said to be the deadliest
storm
in the
last
10 years. Because we’d been told in advance about the
storm
by local authorities, we had prepared ourselves to counter it. Even though we managed to save many of our goods, unfortunately, the furniture that had been placed outside got damaged.
Additionally
, some of the windows
also
have been broken. I’ve tried to contact the local service providers to fix the windows and one of them has agreed upon fixing the windows
next
week. But, the broken furniture needs to be repaired by an expert to whom I couldn’t reach. So, once you get back, see to it what can be done. Don’t you worry about anything else
.
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We’re safe here. I’ll update you
further
in the coming days. Regards, Vishal
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