A letter to your friend travelling overseas. You are staying at their apartment and there was a storm. Tell your friend about the storm. Tell them what got damaged Details what repairs to be done.
It seems that there is an article usage problem here.
It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase before the storm. Consider adding a comma.
The spelling of travelers is a non-British variant. For consistency, consider replacing it with the British English spelling.
It seems that journey may not agree in number with other words in this phrase.
Consider using a question mark to signify that this sentence is a question.
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