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Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.

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In the world where technology is booming
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, people have different arguments about the possible transformation of traditional newspaper and magazines to the digital version. Some people think that e-books and digital technology will completely replace the
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printed
 versions whereas some people think that the significance of
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 versions will remain intact forever. The growth of smartphones and digital devices
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 as tablets and kindles have made people's life easier not only for other many
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reasons, but
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 to read the books, newspapers and magazines. Most of the news outlets and publication houses have started producing digital versions of their
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 products in the name of e-books and e-papers. Some of those the renowned magazines have stopped
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printing
 versions. Digital editions are prompt. The reader doesn'
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 need to go to a bookstore or newspaper shop to buy e-books and
epapers
writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)
papers
. Comparatively, it is cheaper than the
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 versions as it doesn'
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 require
paper
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 to
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 and a
distributer
someone who markets merchandise
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distributors
 to sell. Electric versions are light. Those can fit in a digital device and don'
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 occupy space in a backpack during travel.
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, e-books are eco-friendly as these don'
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 require to cut trees to produce
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.
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, some people want to touch and feel the
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. They like the smell of
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 and ink.
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 versions don'
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 need
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an Internet connection
 to download or battery power to read. I agree that the e-books and e-papers will be popular and handy in coming days because of the development of technology and gadgets but
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 versions will
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 remain significant in human life.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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