Most people are spending their free time watching a movie. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?

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We spend most of our leisure
time
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watching
TV
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. It might be because we are bored and have nothing to do during that period. In my opinion, watching
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for leisure is a bad habit.
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of all, people usually feel tired and do not want to do anything in their free
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. Modern life makes people busy all the
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doing things in the office. After a long day, they feel lazy and prefer to lay on the sofa and turn on the
TV
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. Usually, as adults, they are not really watching
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, they just want to hear the news while they are doing laundry, cooking, cleaning and so on. Sometimes,
TV
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sounds help to break down the silent environment too. It happens not only to
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adult, but
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to children, whose parents always head off
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to
work. Watching a movie during free
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has
impacts
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impacted
. There
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are
many different kinds of
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programs,
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as romance, horror, comedy, and sometimes violence too. Watching
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violent
movies
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are
really harmful to children’s development.
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, watching
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also
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leads to less communication which can cause lack of social skills. It
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can cause many health problems due to lack of exercises.
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, we are able to learn a lot of things from
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programs
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as cooking, English, and so on. In conclusion, I think there is nothing wrong if we spend our free
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to watch
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.
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, we should concern more about the contains. In my opinion, I still encourage people to do more exercises
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of sitting and watching a movie
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at
their free
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. Watching
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and doing exercises need to have a balance between.

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