Most people are spending their free time watching a movie. Is it a good thing or a bad thing?

We spend most of our leisure
time
watching
TV
. It might be because we are bored and have nothing to do during that period. In my opinion, watching
TV
for leisure is a bad habit.
First
of all, people usually feel tired and do not want to do anything in their free
time
. Modern life makes people busy all the
time
doing things in the office. After a long day, they feel lazy and prefer to lay on the sofa and turn on the
TV
. Usually, as adults, they are not really watching
TV
, they just want to hear the news while they are doing laundry, cooking, cleaning and so on. Sometimes,
TV
sounds help to break down the silent environment too. It happens not only to
adult but
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adult, but
also
to children, whose parents always head off
for
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to
work. Watching a movie during free
time
has
impacts
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impacted
. There
is
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are
many different kinds of
TV
programs,
such
as romance, horror, comedy, and sometimes violence too. Watching
violence
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violent
movies
is
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are
really harmful to children’s development.
In addition
, watching
TV
also
leads to less communication which can cause lack of social skills. It
also
can cause many health problems due to lack of exercises.
In contrast
, we are able to learn a lot of things from
TV
programs
such
as cooking, English, and so on. In conclusion, I think there is nothing wrong if we spend our free
time
to watch
TV
.
However
, we should concern more about the contains. In my opinion, I still encourage people to do more exercises
instead
of sitting and watching a movie
in
Suggestion
at
their free
time
. Watching
TV
and doing exercises need to have a balance between.
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