A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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students

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freedom from control or influence of another or others

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assistance because checking their works for to see their mistakes to improve what they have done wrong. To make

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every subject so they need to attend courses to improve the method of learning.

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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