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A huge number of students choose to study English independently on a self-study basis rather than attend a formal course. However, without the assistance of a teacher, students often find it difficult to manage their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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As we all know a
student
 without teachers and assistance they will have
diffcult
an effort that is inconvenient
difficulty
 of understanding how it
work
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works
.
Accept space
.
To be able manage
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Be able to manage
To be able to manage
 their studies in their own time of self-study.I totally agree
in
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with
 my own
view not all
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view, not all
student
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students
 can manage to study always in their own time
indepenence
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
. Some students have a learning difficulties or have a
dslysica
 or not good at English in whether
grammar
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grammatically
 or extend their vocabulary
this
 need
a
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an
 extra support whether one to one support.
For example
 a
student
need
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needs
 additional learning support for their exams for a reader or for someone to check their work.
However
,
Accept space
,
students need to study
independent
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independently
 as well as having lessons, some
student
 need
a
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an
 assistance because checking their works for to see their mistakes to improve what they have done wrong. To make
improvement
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improvements
 you would need to know what is your weaknesses and your
strenghts
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strengths
.I know not all
student
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students
good
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well
at
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in
 every subject so they need to attend courses to improve the method of learning.
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