In Britain, when someone gets old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them. Sometimes the government has to pay for this care. Who do you think should pay for this care, the government or the family? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Old people are more needed for society to tell which is good and bad. To tell about their experience and to guide us in
proper way
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the proper way
a proper way
. In Britain, elder people are allowed to spend their time at home with nurses taking care of them. It is
responsibly
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responsible
responsibility
responsibilities
of
family
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the family
families
a family
to pay for their medical care. Alone with that government should
also
offer
them some pensions for old age people. Government should give some basic pay for ancient people
for
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their health care.
Government
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The government
should
offer
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this
kind of citizens.
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pensions for elders who crossed 60.Government should
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free health facilities for hearts problems and some specific deceases as all cannot effort them. Family should look after their parents, It is their respon

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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