Animals are in danger of extinction. Some people say that we should protect only those animals, which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree?

It is irrefutable that animals have a crucial role in maintaining the ecological balance on earth. It is argued that only those animals are to be protected those are imperative for the human being.
Although
, I am at completely discord with
this
statement as the animals play an indispensable part in human's life.
This
essay intends to elucidate the argument against the favour of my stance in the upcoming paragraph. To embark upon, the
first
and foremost compelling factor associated with
this
is that numerous unique
species
in the current epoch
is declining
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are declining
in
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at
an exponential rate due to environmental factors
such
as global warming, deforestation and
draught
a shortage of rainfall
drought
which are the critical aspects that are diminishing the endangered
species
from the biosphere. Poaching, for citation, is the major part play disappearing the endangered
species
from the earth, there is no denying the fact that the manner in which human beings are deliberately utilizing the animals for their profits sans looking the negative aspects of it as they assist us in balancing the ecological system. Ergo, it is our onus to save the endangered
species
with the corrective measure and suitable steps. On the flip sides, there are plenty of arguments in favour of my stance. The most significant one is that all living
being
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beings
are given utmost
priority whether
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priority, whether
it is a human being, flora or fauna. All living
entity
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entities
is
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are
the part of mother nature and everyone has the responsibility to protect each other so that an ecosystem must be maintained. Apart from that, Each and every element on the earth is bestowed the equal priority, ergo, it is the responsibility of everyone on the planet to protect the life of each other as they are interlinked. To exemplify, when the food chain is maintained, our ecological system clocks properly, if
this
is not maintained, it would impact the nature and
hence
it is a probability that one day every
species
can come under the scanner of non-existence.
Thus
, it is required to protect the creature in all the possible manners for their existence. To recapitulate, creatures are the precious element of our planet.
This
essay discussed how myriad of attributes
such
as environmental factors and human selfishness
are
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is
the
example contributing
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example, contributing
to extinct the fauna from the Earth for many reasons.
However
, it cannot be neglected that by suitable actions and measure,
in addition
, by rendering the priority to the animals, the extinction can be achieved. In my notion, I am entirely agreed that it is our responsibility to protect entire lives rather than specific
species
.
Submitted by Serhio Baraniuk on

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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