Some people think it w more effective for students to study in grou while others believe that it is better for them to study alone.Discuss both views and give your opinion

People have different views about the effectiveness of
group
work
as opposed to working alone. While there are some benefits to
study
independently
,
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I believe that
group
study
is more productive Working alone brings us several advantages.When we
study
alone
,
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,
there will not have any noise which
interrupt
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interrupts
us with working and
thus
we will
fell
undergo an emotional sensation or be in a particular state of mind
feel
comfortable.
In addition
to, studying independently helps us concentrate on our studies
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If we
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alone, we
will plough a lonely
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furrow
when we have troubles
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We have to research information or measures to take by ourselves.
This
makes us understand in depth and be retentive I believe that students
study
in
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groups is
more productive.
Firstly
group
work
helps us develop our soft skills
such
as
teamwork skill
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teamwork, skill
,
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,
communication skill
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leadership skill
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etc
continuing in the same way
etc.
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the top of that
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in terms of knowledge when we
study
in
group
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a group
the group
groups
we can acquire many ideas or information from other people in
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a group
groups
the group
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,
we
also
can address problems faster.
Finally
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work
will he
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a group
check answers for each other; simultaneou
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effect, but
ng in
group
also
enhances academiac competitiveness In conclusion,studying in
group
or studying alone both has a two-pronged effect but I believe that
group
work
is more beneficial than studying alone

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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