Some people think it is more important for government to spend public money on promoting healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment of people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that the expenditure on enhancing healthy
lifestyle
to avoid from diseases rather than spending
money
on medical conditions to cure people of their available health issues. While I agree that
impulsing
impressive in appearance
imposing
healthy
lifestyle
should be invested, I
also
think that the support of government for treating many patients is likely to be more vital. On the one hand, there are
serveral
(used with count nouns) of an indefinite number more than 2 or 3 but not many
several
reasons why I believe that authority should spend their
money
on encouraging
healthy
Suggestion
healthy lifestyles
a healthy lifestyle
lifestyle
.
Firstly
, it is true that some diseases might result from sedentary life on a daily basis. People seem to be so caught up in their works and studies,
hence
, they are not accustomed to do exercises regularly to maintain their health.
Secondly
, more people tend to prefer travelling by cars to
walking
Suggestion
walk
or to cycling, which leads to a significant increase in the number of people being more prone
t
in the direction of
to
obesity in
manycountries
Suggestion
many countries
around the world.
Therefore
, it is necessary for government to spend
money
on not only constructing more new sport
centres but
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centres, but
also
on improving the quality of public transport to advocate people to live
healthier
Suggestion
a healthier lifestyle
healthier lifestyles
lifestyle
.
On the other hand
, I
also
think that the expenditure on the treatment of people who are suffering illness is more important. The
first
reason is that beside unhealthy
lifestyle
, there are some other reasons which may cause serious health issues. In Vietnam,
for example
, the hazardous problem of dirty food, water and air pollution all have
becomed
enter or assume a certain state or condition
become
became
burning topics that everyone concerns because they have been detrimental directly to their lives. Another reason is that many patients, especially who have chronic and acute diseases,
needs
Suggestion
need
medicines and
effectively
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effective
medical techniques to be cured.
As a result
, the most essential thing for people who are ill already is the support from government in the way of spending public
money
on enhancing the quality of services in many hospitals and researching on medical conditions. In conclusion, spending public
money
on the treatment of people who are having
illness
Suggestion
an illness
is less important than the expenditure on encouraging healthy
lifestyle
to prevent diseases.
Although
it is necessary to invest in improving people’s
lifestyle
, I think that spending on curing patients is more important.

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