Facebook is good app for business, are you agree with this opinion? if not, explain why?

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also have
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Facebook app
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The Facebook app
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agree with
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the above opinion
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Doing
business on
facebook
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Facebook
is good choice for those who both using
app
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an app
the app
and learning the way to earn money. It is undoubtedly the case that
Facebook
has became
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has become
popular app in the world, Statistic shows that the number of people are using
Facebook
up to 1.9 billion
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a person who makes use of a thing; someone who uses or employs something
users
.
it
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It
is really a desire number that any application is dreaming as well, so
that is
the reason why there have many people doing business on
Facebook
.
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at
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of
all, you do not need to spend much money for
maketing
the exchange of goods for an agreed sum of money
marketing
because it is easy for you to bring your product that you want to sell to the customers.
For example
, Now you
selling
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are selling
sell
clothes and
then
what must you need do is send your product pictures in some groups on
facebook
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Facebook
, and the users will see your product when they online.
if
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If
they mind
it they
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it, they
will contact you to buy it.
In addition
, the costs for doing business on
Facebook
is not much as you
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are not absolutely spending
do not absolutely spend
money renting the shop.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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