Consumers are faced with increasing numbers of advertising from competing companies. To what extent do

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It is said that nowadays, a large number of companies use advertisements as

such

a great impact to the

consumer

. I believe that

consumer

fed up with daily advertising and marketing techniques.

Therefore

, they need to be

ensured

react verbally

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about their own wellbeing from the advertisements..............................................................................................................Promotion has become the multibillion dollar industry and companies use

this

type of action to push

consumer

purchase their products and services. Despite of having a great deal of benefits, advertisements

also

have negative influences which leads to

consumer

' wrong choices.

For example

, promotions on several social

network

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networks

can push consumers to buy their products which lead people to make

impulsive purchase

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impulsive purchases

an impulsive purchase

Also

, many companies

uses

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use

sexual or subliminal

Accept space

contents

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to attract

consumer

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consumers

the consumer

to buy their products and services due to relaxed advertising law. In fact,

this

such

a dangerous actions of them, if the children see those types of promotions, they will be influenced on their thoughts and mind In conclusion, for these, and many other reasons, I believe that Governments and other organisations need to restrict how companies try to promote their products and services in order to protect innocent consumers.....................................................

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