Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, the global relationship always brings benefit

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of

all the

countries especially

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countries, especially

the poor countries.

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these countries often receive financial aid from richer countries, the poverty is not actually solved. For that, it is sometimes argued that developed countries should change another

way

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if they want to help the areas, which are

under-developed

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

underdeveloped

, and I totally agree with

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view.

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of all, an amount of

money

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is not the solution that poor

counties

a politically organized body of people under a single government

countries

are facing

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are faced

will be faced

with

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as poverty. It means that the

money

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will run out if the resident of these countries know how to earn it by producing the goods and services. The government cannot give food or accommodation everyday thank

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for

using

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money

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. In fact,

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solution just only suitable for a short term but the thing, which these counties need, is a key for financial troubles in long term.

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, rich countries should change another

way

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by teaching poorer countries the

way

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to produce market. In

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particular

, some chief executive officers from

developed

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developing

countries should flight to these counties and teach them about sales, marketing, produce products.

The poor

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Poorer

countries can study step by step about

economy

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the economy

of the world. From that, they can find the answer

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to

the financial difficulties.

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, a plan for

new financial solution

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the new financial solution

is more beneficial than an amount of

money

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sending from

developed

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developing

countries. In conclusion, I believe that the monetary assistance should be changed by another

way

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because it is not suitable in

long term

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the long term

.

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, other types of support should be given to these countries.