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Some people prefer to shop for food in supermarkets. Other people prefer to do their food shopping online. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Shopping online has become a significant part in the worldwide market. Nowadays, many people prefer to get food shopping online, while many shoppers still keep the traditional way by visiting supermarkets.
This
 essay focuses discussing why shopping online has
much
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many
 conveniences, but why traditional shopping still has superior advantageous in the market
No one
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No, one
 cannot deny the trust that shopping online gives various benefits for themselves in their hectic lifestyle.
Instead
 of spending time around supermarkets to get enough ingredients,
then
 preparing them for cooking to the end plates, people can get food
delivery
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delivered
 just by a click mouse through
websites
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web sites
 or a call from wherever. As the
result in
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result, in
 statistic, shopping online can help to save time and budget through limiting the cost for transportation and waste from processing.
Therefore
, it is the efficient solution saving busy people away unnecessary hassle of shopping.
However
, visiting the supermarkets is still the
favorite
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
 option
of
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for
 many people being able to manage time for shopping. The diversification in every
types
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type
 of
good
any substance that can be metabolized by an animal to give energy and build tissue
food
 in
vast market
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the vast market
vast markets
 creates variety options for customers,
then
 walking directly to stores and selecting exactly what we expect still
give
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given
 the pleasurable experiences.
For example
, taking part in consumer testing for a yogurt product with new
flavor
the general atmosphere of a place or situation and the effect that it has on people
flavours
 in supermarkets can support to choose by comparing with a typical product. In the other word, shopping in traditional way gives more satisfying in spending money. With the development of technologies, shopping online is a fabulous option challenging the traditional way. The reasons
explains
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explain
are explained
 how efficient of shopping online comparing to shopping in person were mentioned in the essay. From my point of view, experiences in supermarkets are more interesting than surfing websites for shopping.
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