nowadays many people have access to computer on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games what are the negative impact of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effect?

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that recently a lot of people can
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use
information technology for searching
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everything, especially
everything especially
kids who willing to play games by
computer
are raising.
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Using
computer
for children causes
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serious
seriously
consequences
such
as
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a young person of either sex
kids
will lazy to do their
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of
on
health.
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,
this
problem will
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discuss
discussed
in
this
essay and some solution will be suggested
the
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The
first
, play games in
computer
have
bad effect
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bad effects
a bad effect
for children because of games make
them
people in general
they
are addicted.
for
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For
example, kids focus to
olay
participate in games or sport
play
games more than study lead to lower academic result and not pay attention to
lessons
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the lessons
.
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addition,
this
problem
maybe
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may be
consequence about health.
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For
instance, for kids who play
game
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games
everytime
will impact healthy special eyesight.
based
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Based
on the problems above, parents
should be take
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should take
should be taken
care more their children and remove some the bad games.
for
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For
example, give children to improve soft skill after a hard-study day or play sports like football, baseball,....
to
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To
increase their
capapcity
capability to perform or produce
capacity
.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, lectures and lesson
should be add
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should add
more activities to go up the attraction of children.
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For
instance, after
lecture
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the lecture
should have
field trip
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a field trip
to apply what knowledge they learned to reduce addicted play game by
computer rate
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the computer rate
after
stressfull
extremely irritating to the nerves
stressful
lesson.
in
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In
conclusion,
computer
games are wonderful to play and it
also bring
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also brings
has also brought
us nice thing but everything
have limited
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has limits
has limited
.
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The
best effective solution ate to parents and teacher need to take care more child and student and teach them about
negative impact
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the negative impact
of play
computer
game
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