nowadays many people have access to computer on a wide basis and a large number of children play computer games what are the negative impact of playing computer games and what can be done to minimize the bad effect?

It is truly said that nowadays computers are popular and easy to use a tool in human life.
However
, playing games on computers of young people are gradually increasing.
This
is lead to a wide range of negative effects on their health and learning.
Therefore
,
this
issue will be discussed along with some solutions that may be implemented. The
first
cause of playing
computer
games may be that it will cause serious health-related consequences.
For example
, the game is actually a type of
entertainment but
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entertainment, but
when children play too much, it will be an addictive factor that makes them always come to it at any time.
This
leads to a child's vision to go down and
moreover
the child can lose eat and sleep with these games. A
further
a male parent (also used as a term of address to your father)
father
of
this
problem may be that
computer
games
also
have a significant impact on the results and the learning process of
kids
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the kids
. For illustrations, because the game is like a stimulant, it is inevitable that children neglect to learn.
As a result
, children can feel bored whenever they see books and want to drop out of school.
This
leads to a downward learning result and the amount of knowledge in the classroom is zero. Having fully
understand
Suggestion
understood
the problems of playing
computer
games that possible actions should be taken to tackle
these issue
Suggestion
this issue
these issues
.
Firstly
, parents should regularly take
children
Suggestion
the children
outside to play with their friends and encourage children to play folk games rather than
computer
games.
Secondly
, parents should care more about their children, always ask about their children's learning situation, listen and share with them to help them be
more happy
Suggestion
happier
most happy
and comfortable in their learning as well as
development physiological mind
Suggestion
the development physiological mind
a development physiological mind
of children. In conclusion, playing
computer
games is not
bad but
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bad, but
it is
also
harmful to children's health and learning.
In addition
, parents
also
need to have appropriate solutions for games that children enjoy
such
as listening, sharing, chatting with children.
Therefore reducing
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Therefore, reducing
the harm that
computer
games bring.

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