Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environment responsibility While others believe that tourists should not accept any responsiblity at all.To what Extend do you agree or disagree.

People from other places who
came
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to Explore
the
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tourist places
has
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social
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a social
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obligation.I completely agree with the above statement.
Besides
,sightseeing,adventuring or whatever way
there
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they
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being
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thrilled,they have to look after their Surroundings.I will outline in the essay,the major threats
possessed
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posed
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by them to the environment. It is a common
practise
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practice
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for
the
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visitors to throw garbage. Whenever they go around an area they would carry the usual food stuffs.
Although
there are many waste dumping buckets,
yet
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they
drops
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in the area convenient for them.
These
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waste gets
accumalated
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accumulated
and
it
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degrades the ambience of
place
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the place
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.
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,
india
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India
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well known
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ganga
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river had been
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tourist spot earlier,but now
the
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individuals cannot approach the area
due to
water pollution.
Secondly
,the buzz made by them is annoying to the nearby communities.The tourists may not even consider the place regardless they may sing or roar aloud,
consequenty
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consequently
The inhabitants sleep might
gets
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interrupted.To illustrate In a
camp fire
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campfire
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,they have no control of their senses,extremely jovious at that moment.
To sum up
,tourists should be conscious of their
acts
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actions
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.If it is harmful to the society and environment they must refrain from it.
Tourists
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aim should be not only
visit
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to visit
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the places
,
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apply
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but
also
maintain
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to maintain
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the ambience of
it
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them
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.
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