Some people believe that tourists should accept social and environment responsibility While others believe that tourists should not accept any responsiblity at all.To what Extend do you agree or disagree.
People from other places who tourist spot earlier,but now
came
to Explore Wrong verb form
come
the
tourist places Correct article usage
apply
has
Change the verb form
have
social
obligation.I completely agree with the above statement.Add an article
a social
the social
Besides
,sightseeing,adventuring or whatever way there
Correct your spelling
they
being
thrilled,they have to look after their Surroundings.I will outline in the essay,the major threats Wrong verb form
are
possessed
by them to the environment. It is a common Verb problem
posed
practise
for Correct your spelling
practice
the
visitors to throw garbage. Whenever they go around an area they would carry the usual food stuffs.Correct article usage
apply
Although
there are many waste dumping buckets,yet
theyCorrect word choice
apply
drops
in the area convenient for them.Change the verb form
drop
These
waste gets Correct determiner usage
This
accumalated
and Correct your spelling
accumulated
it
degrades the ambience of Correct pronoun usage
apply
place
. Add an article
the place
For instance
,india
Change the capitalization
India
well known
Add a hyphen
well-known
ganga
river had beenChange the capitalization
Ganga
Correct article usage
a
the
individuals cannot approach the area Correct article usage
apply
due to
water pollution. Secondly
,the buzz made by them is annoying to the nearby communities.The tourists may not even consider the place regardless they may sing or roar aloud,consequenty
The inhabitants sleep might Correct your spelling
consequently
gets
interrupted.To illustrate In a Change the verb form
get
camp fire
,they have no control of their senses,extremely jovious at that moment. Correct your spelling
campfire
To sum up
,tourists should be conscious of their acts
.If it is harmful to the society and environment they must refrain from it.Replace the word
actions
Tourists
aim should be not only Change noun form
Tourists'
Tourist's
visit
the placesFix the infinitive
to visit
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
maintain
the ambience of Fix the infinitive
to maintain
it
.Correct pronoun usage
them
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