International tourism is the world’s biggest industry. Unfortunately, this trend often causes tension rather than understanding between people from different cultures. Agree or disagree

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with far more modernized than ever before international tourism has

became

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become

the most prominent sector in

industry

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the industry

. While there are several

benificial

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benefits

beneficial

for

this

trend, I believe that

this

trend

could still brings

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could still bring

drawbacks. It is clear that foreign tourists bring some advantages for local people.

This

is due to the fact that oversea tourists would create job opportunities for the local as well as directly contribute to

thier

of them or themselves

their

income via

accomodation

making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances

accommodation

, food and transportation.

As a result

, local people could improve standard livings, spending more money for their health and educating their children in a better way.

However

, I believe

this

to be a very short-sighted view. It is evidence that tourists coming from other nations would destroy biodiversity as well as residential areas. To be more precise, investors could cut down

trees even

Accept comma addition

trees, even

forest to build attractive areas which captivate tourists to raise income for it. It is evidence that foreign visitors could bring a mix of civilisations.

This

is simply because

simultanously

at the same instant

simultaneously

people become easier to approach new

culture

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cultural

values coming from

other countries in over

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other countries over

the world.

Consequently

, local would lost traditional values as well as unique cultures remained thousand years. What is more, the local face with contamination issues produced by

tourists

someone who theorizes (especially in science or art)

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such

as air or noise

pullutions

undesirable state of the natural environment being contaminated with harmful substances as a consequence of human activities

pollution

. Because travellers could use mean of transportations to move all of attractive

destinationand

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destination and

speak with any

volumn

a line of units following one after another

column

volume

they want.

This

would lead to people could easier to get diseases related to lung or mental illnesses. In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are some merits from international tourists in

tourism industry

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the tourism industry

. I

would be believe

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would believe

that the phenomenon

also

brings some demerits.