Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measure are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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peaple
(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
argue in
favot
of the policy to increase the number of sports
facities
a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
,
for
example gyms
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, gyms a means of improving public health. The others think that
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is ineffective
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Of her
Ofher
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becoming greater or larger
increasing
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the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals
number
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spots before the eyes caused by opaque cell fragments in the vitreous humor and lens
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,
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capable of being reached
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Pluck
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to exercise at.
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make easier
facilitates
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not on a regular route of a transportation system
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in accordance with truth or fact or reality
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longer here
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longer here to
lonyer here to
lonyer hear to
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Drive
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earlier in time; previously
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the relative magnitudes of two quantities (usually expressed as a quotient)
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the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention
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pass time in a specific way
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able to act at will; not hampered; not under compulsion or restraint
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the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercising
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In
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the post or function properly or customarily occupied or served by another
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a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
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the process of the sweat glands of the skin secreting a salty fluid
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a contest with rules to determine a winner
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guns
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the shore of a sea or ocean regarded as a resort
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the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
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the phonological or orthographic sound or appearance of a word that can be used to describe or identify something
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release, as from one's grip
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realize
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of many different kinds purposefully arranged but lacking any uniformity
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promoting or enhancing well-being
beneficial
substares
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substrates
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provide physical relief, as from pain
relieves
stress
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Ten
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a word or expression used for some particular thing
term
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consistent
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also leads
also lead
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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
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not easy; requiring great physical or mental effort to accomplish or comprehend or endure
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a flat thin rectangular slab (as of fired clay or rubber or linoleum) used to cover surfaces
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the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals
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of sports
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is a
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a cell that is specialized to conduct nerve impulses
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a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
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introduces an alternative
or
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available source of wealth; a new or reserve supply that can be drawn upon when needed
resources
;
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;
however
,
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,
it is
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presently existing in fact and not merely potential or possible
actual
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Inactive
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An ore
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reasons
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question word; what is the reason
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to be
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in the direction of
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their
health is
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negation of a word or group of words
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a fact that has been verified
truth
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definite article
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governnent
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
tails to
fucilitole
make easier
facilitate
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an instance or single occasion for some event
time
them
team
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,
it is
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for the reason that; on account of
because
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an edge tool with a heavy bladed head mounted across a handle
axe
as
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not disposed or inclined toward
unwilling
willing
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to be
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tending to become more severe or wider in scope
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group of people makes up the
maijonty
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in what way or manner or by what means
how
abundont
forsaken by owner or inhabitants
abandoned
the local
gyrs
a young woman
girls
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a unit of surface area equal to 100 square meters
are
going to
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,
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,
these
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frogs
frog
garage
will
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not ever; at no time in the past or future
never
chonge
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
change
their unhealthy habits.
However
,
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,
there is a counter-
soluton
a homogeneous mixture of two or more substances; frequently (but not necessarily) a liquid solution
solution
solutions
which is
thovght
to be Moke
effechiwe
place of business where professional or clerical duties are performed
office
:
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:
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Governnent
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Government
sholl
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should
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starts
start
started
state
by
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the profession of a teacher
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(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively
people
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the place where something begins, where it springs into being
source
since
search
the very
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of you or yourself
your
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age hon
inportant
of great significance or value
important
and
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fruit preserved by cooking with sugar
preserves
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health
a form of energy that is transferred by a difference in temperature
heat
is
,
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,
Possibe
hamns
all of the living human inhabitants of the earth
humans
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hormones
as
resvss
increase the number of rotations per minute
revs
of
lock
the state of needing something that is absent or unavailable
lack
of exercise need to be
addiesed
(of mail) marked with a destination
addressed
.
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without any others being included or involved
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in
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an educational institution
schools
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United States athlete and Black American whose success in the 1936 Olympic Games in Berlin outraged Hitler (1913-1980)
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located or moved above the surround or above the normal position
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properly. To conclude
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a structure in which animals lay eggs or give birth to their young
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nauseating
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bench is
of
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an itemized statement of money owed for goods shipped or services rendered
invoicing
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in the direction of
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the property possessed by a sum or total or indefinite quantity of units or individuals
number
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quantifier; used with either mass or count nouns to indicate the whole number or amount of or every one of a class
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a building or place that provides a particular service or is used for a particular industry
facilities
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go
went
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follow, discover, or ascertain the course of development of something
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not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
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the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
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