It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and others are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is widely
acknownledged
recognized or made known or admitted
acknowledged
that potentials relating to
musics
, sports and others which have
sticked
caught or fixed
stuck
to
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with
people since they were born are thought that they are possible to be trained to master
.
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.
There are several views and opinions given in
this
essay. Obviously,
child
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the child
a child
are known
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is known
that they are straightforward to learn the new skills as
musics
,
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,
arts or
sports but
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sports, but
with the potentials of each individual they are able to learn these techniques which seem to be natural for
child
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a child
children
the child
when they are born more effortlessly than the other
child
without these potentials.
However
,
this
plural of "this"
these
skills have been the optional subjects in the educational system as the way of developing their natural talents rather than the type of subjects that play the role in improving the brain function or physical function for each
child
.
For instance
,
child
lack of natural abilities for
musics
, sports or the others
seem
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seems
to be challenging to adapt the skills despite being well-educated. In
constrast
the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared
contrast
, these abilities are possibly trained or improved for
child
lack of
this
if they are really keen on learning or practicing them as their hobby.
For example
, there
are
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is
the enormous number of big name
megas
(informal) excellent
mega
stars or even well-
reputated
sport players who do not have the natural ability of their
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section, but
they
are succeed
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are succeeding
are succeeded
have succeeded
in their section base
on
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in
the process of making their
abilities outstanding
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outstanding abilities
.
Moreover
, these
type
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types
of sections not only has
reliance
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relied
on the
potential but
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potential, but
also
bases on each individual hobby and willing. In conclusion, the natural talents are the optimal condition for
child
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a child
children
the child
to be successful in their
sections but
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sections, but
improving these type of techniques is
also
the key for them to get the rewards.
Additionally
, the natural abilities
also
play the essential role in being optimal at sections
such
as
musics
, arts or sports.

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