Fossil fuel is the main source of energy. In some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy is encouraged. To what extent do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is argued that despite fossil fuel being the predominant energy provision, alternatives are being explored as a substitute and becoming an infinitely preferable option. It seems that
this
trend is greatly desirable.
This
essay will elaborate on some reasons to justify
this
stance.
First
and foremost, the primary benefit of alternative fuel compared to conventional energy sources would appear to be its inexhaustible supply.
That is
to say, as power is derived from natural
forces including
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forces, including
sun, wind or water which are inherently replenished, it is likely not to be used up,
hence
ensuring the infinite generation. A
furthur
to or at a greater extent or degree or a more advanced stage ('further' is used more often than 'farther' in this abstract sense)
further
well-known factor relates to its friendliness to ecology.
In other words
, as compared to traditional energies at the expense of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
and thereby taking a toll on the population, the development of these sustainable
resources emit
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resources, emits
resources emits
little or no carbon dioxide, it proves to bring in the
necessasy
absolutely essential
necessary
carbon cuts. A prime example can be seen in
Iceland where
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Iceland, where
this
appears to be the case and a number of countries follow suit. The nation has increased its investment in
renewables
to almost 100% of its energy, having had good environmental credentials. To the ardent proponents of the idea, these advantages are quite convincing. Admittedly, it is true that there are some negatives to the use of alternative fuel, most notably its extortionate cost in
discourage
Suggestion
discouraging
the exploitation of these unconventional sources. Despite
this
, it seems that these issues are outweighed by pleasures as the displacement will definitely
addresss
the place where a person or organization can be found or communicated with
address
addresses
the plight of power scarcity while hardly doing harm to the environment. On balance, albeit the undesirable effects, there is an array of favourable argumentation to explain why the substitution is
approving
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approved
. It is projected that on the horizon by cutting back on carbon emissions countries around the world are making major strides in stemming the rate of increase and will probably reverse the process of global warming.

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