Modern technology, such as personal computers and the internet, have made it possible for many people to do their work from home at least part of the time instead of going to an office everyday. What are some of the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?

In
this
technological era, computers and
internet
Suggestion
the internet
are part of our routine life. One
can not
can not
cannot
imagine life without it.
What
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What's
not? Because, it helps in many ways which simplifies our life in many ways and one of them is that we can do work from the
home
instead
of going to
office
Suggestion
the office
everyday. As it is said that everything comes with
it
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
drawbacks lets, discuss
it’s
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
pros and cons.
First
of all, it aids to reduce the saves the amount of time to
going
obtain
gain
office
and coming back to
home
that male; objective male pronoun
him
every day,
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
for bigger and crowded cities where a person spends a lot of time in travelling.
Secondaly
Suggestion
Secondly
, in a view of global warming, it is very crucial to control it by reducing the pollution from vehicles in major cities. According to
reasearch
systematic investigation to establish facts
research
researches
researcher
, it is estimated that 80% of the pollution
contributted
bestow a quality on
contributed
by the vehicles that are used
everyfay
found in the ordinary course of events
everyday
for
comuting
the travel of a commuter
commuting
to
officies
place of business where professional or clerical duties are performed
office
.
This
might be the best option to reduce
such
pollution by creating and encouraging more opportunities from working
home
.
Lastly
, female gender would be more likely to
benefited
Suggestion
benefit
by
avaibility
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the availability
availability
of work from
home
specially working mother,
pregnent
carrying developing offspring within the body or being about to produce new life
pregnant
women or independent women who is not financially strong. On the other side, it is not as productive as
office
bacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
environment of the
office
is more competitive. At
home
, one might not able to get the suitable targets that can be achieved at
home
.
Moreover
, working at
home
makes
person
Suggestion
a person
people
the person
very lazy and unhealthy as there would not be any regulations and manner that we follow in
office environment
Suggestion
an office environment
the office environment
. To cap it up, working from
home
would be
blessing
Suggestion
blessed
for many people if it would be followed by proper regulations
otherwise
it might lead to a other harsh results.

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