In some countries, advertisers increase the amount of advertising which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys and other goods. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
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In some parts of the world, children are faced with the increase of advertisements which encourage them to buy foods and entertainment gadgets. There has been some objections raised by these children's parents about the impact on their kids while other people working in
advertising field
claimed that their works bring Suggestion
the advertising field
knowledge
to customer
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customers
This
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Firstly
, there are concerns that the increasing of advertising can pose a threat to a children mind set. On a daily basis, too many advertisements can result in making children to think that the procession of the product is an absolutely must. For example
, children watching a
advertisement about a new Lego product with many cool benefits day after day is likely to make tricks so as to force their parents to buy the thing that they see. Suggestion
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can be the root of children not obeying to their parents if these kids don't get what they want. Besides
that, one of the result
could be inequality among children in their school. With young children's friends keep buying snacks, toys that are introduced on Suggestion
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advertisement
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an advertisement
this
will make other kids feel intimidated and less confidents
as they don't process what having or marked by confidence or assurance
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On the other hand
, advertisements can enrich children with knowledge
and offer them a better tools
for their future. Young children who watch advertisements related to technology Suggestion
tool
such
as new mobilephones
, the development of microchips can gain Suggestion
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usefull
information which can be used in many subjects at school. They will be equipped with being of use or service
useful
knowledge
that are not being taught at school and get a chance to know more about the world they are living in. Other
benefit can be listed is that these advertisements will notice children with the retail price of the products and the way it is introduced to customers. For those children who show Suggestion
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in marketing and Suggestion
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child's
children's
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mind set
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pupils, but
also
on their parents. If demand is not meet
, it may cause these children to experience some drawbacks that have been discussed above
In conclusion, there are still arguments between the benefits and drawbacks impacts of the increasing advertising on children. In my point of view, advertisements in some aspects can benefit children with many Suggestion
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usefull
information and being of use or service
useful
knowledge
despite of the increasing in number. Thus
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problem outweight
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