In some countries, advertisers increase the amount of advertising which try to persuade children to buy snacks, toys and other goods. Parents object to such pressure on children. But some advertisers claim that there is useful information in these advertisements. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some parts of the world, children are faced with the increase of advertisements which encourage them to buy foods and entertainment gadgets. There has been some objections raised by these children's parents about the impact on their kids while other people working in

advertising field

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the advertising field

claimed that their works bring

knowledge

to

customer

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the customer

customers

.

This

essay will discuss both opinion and give own perception of

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Firstly

, there are concerns that the increasing of advertising can pose a threat to a children mind set. On a daily basis, too many advertisements can result in making children to think that the procession of the product is an absolutely must.

For example

, children watching

a

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an

advertisement about a new Lego product with many cool benefits day after day is likely to make tricks so as to force their parents to buy the thing that they see.

This

can be the root of children not obeying to their parents if these kids don't get what they want.

Besides

that, one of the

result

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results

could be inequality among children in their school. With young children's friends keep buying snacks, toys that are introduced on

advertisement

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an advertisement

,

this

will make other kids feel intimidated and less

confidents

having or marked by confidence or assurance

confident

confidence

as they don't process what

other

plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned

others

have.

On the other hand

, advertisements can enrich children with

knowledge

and offer them a better

tools

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tool

for their future. Young children who watch advertisements related to technology

such

as new

mobilephones

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mobile phones

, the development of microchips can gain

usefull

being of use or service

useful

information which can be used in many subjects at school. They will be equipped with

knowledge

that are not being taught at school and get a chance to know more about the world they are living in.

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Another

benefit can be listed is that these advertisements will notice children with the retail price of the products and the way it is introduced to customers. For those children who show

interest

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an interest

in marketing and

sale

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sales

jobs,

this

plural of "this"

these

those

benefits can set the

foudation

the basis on which something is grounded

foundation

of young

children

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child's

children's

child

mind set

a habitual or characteristic mental attitude that determines how you will interpret and respond to situations

mindset

which can eventually

helping

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help

them in creating marketing strategy or sale campaign lately.

However at

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However, at

the early age without guidance from parents, children

can easily be attract

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can easily attract

can easily be attracted

to

to a degree exceeding normal or proper limits

too

many products that they see on advertisements.

This

will create pressure not only on

yound

(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth

young

pupils but

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pupils, but

also

on their parents. If demand is not

meet

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met

, it may cause these children to experience some drawbacks that have been discussed above In conclusion, there are still arguments between the benefits and drawbacks impacts of the increasing advertising on children. In my point of view, advertisements in some aspects can benefit children with many

usefull

being of use or service

useful

information and

knowledge

despite of the increasing in number.

Thus

, the benefit of

this

problem

outweight

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outweighs

outweigh

their drawbacks.