Introduction
“
Education
is the root Use synonyms
for
a healthy community. Suggestion
of
Education
gives knowledge andUse synonyms
Body paragraph 1
prepares
our children for a better future.” Suggestion
Prepares
said
Chitra Subramanian. Suggestion
Said
That is
why someLinking Words
Body paragraph 2
large
parts around Asia nowadays mostly take an eye on developing the Suggestion
Large
education
Use synonyms
system
Use synonyms
Body paragraph 3
in
order to ensure their Suggestion
In
country
development. Use synonyms
However
, I intensely disagree with thatLinking Words
Body paragraph 4
perspective
because developing a Suggestion
Perspective
country
does not only strengthen Use synonyms
one
aspect of theUse synonyms
Body paragraph 5
social
issues, but Suggestion
Social
also
have to consider about living Linking Words
condition
, security, and equality.Suggestion
conditions
Body paragraph 6
Initially
, what will happen if there is a big gap between the balance of poor livingLinking Words
Body paragraph 7
condition
and best Suggestion
Condition
education
Use synonyms
system
? Children, who come from the remote areas have toUse synonyms
Body paragraph 8
fight
with many issues while they are on their miserably hard way coming to Suggestion
Fight
school
. TakeUse synonyms
Body paragraph 9
students
in the south central of Phu yen- Vietnam as an Suggestion
Students
example
, they have to cross theUse synonyms
Body paragraph 10
15-meter-wide river with their
schoolbags
and uniforms Suggestion
school bags
into
plastic bags so as to reachSuggestion
in
Body paragraph 11
the
other side every day, which is the main reason for almost students there drop out ofSuggestion
The
Body paragraph 12
their
schooling. Suggestion
Their
Moreover
, poverty Linking Words
also
is the core factor leads Linking Words
student left
Suggestion
the student left school
school
to workUse synonyms
Body paragraph 13
because
they are not able to pay the tuition fees; especially in Vietnam, there does notSuggestion
Because
Body paragraph 14
have
any loans for secondary, or high Suggestion
Have
school
students. Use synonyms
Hence
, the Linking Words
education
Use synonyms
system
doesUse synonyms
Body paragraph 15
not
flourish as predicted. There will have more uneducated people, who cannot join in anynegation of a word or group of words
Not
Body paragraph 16
soft
skills, or even hard skills training; Almost of them are unemployed, which is Suggestion
Soft
the high
Suggestion
higher
Body paragraph 17
rate
for crimes from all over the world.Suggestion
Rate
Body paragraph 18
Secondly
, security is Linking Words
also
the factor leads the stabilization of the Linking Words
country
. Use synonyms
One
Use synonyms
Body paragraph 19
nation
cannot flourish even when it has the most modern teaching program. Take PakistanSuggestion
A nation
Nation
The nation
Body paragraph 20
Use synonyms
education
Suggestion
The education system
Education system
system
as an Use synonyms
example
, though Use synonyms
this
Linking Words
country
Use synonyms
Linking Words
also use
the up-to-date teachingSuggestion
also uses
Body paragraph 21
methods
, it Suggestion
Methods
also
cannot be grown and developed because of its jihad. Linking Words
Consequently
,Linking Words
Body paragraph 22
Pakistan is recently known as
one
of the most dangerous and unsafe Use synonyms
country
to live.Use synonyms
Body paragraph 23
Besides
, try to imagine how our kids can pay all their attention to study, if there are Linking Words
bunch
Suggestion
bunched
Body paragraph 24
of
violent threats.Suggestion
Of
Body paragraph 25
“Eighty percent of students say they have suffered from gender-based violence at
Body paragraph 26
least
once, while 71 percent of students have been affected by Suggestion
Least
Use synonyms
school violence in
Suggestion
school violence
Body paragraph 27
the
Suggestion
The
last
six months.” According to a survey in VietnamLinking Words
Body paragraph 28
That points out the high alarm of violence in schools not only from Vietnam, but
also
Linking Words
Body paragraph 29
from
other countries.Suggestion
From
Body paragraph 30
Furthermore
, another hard-solving problem is that there still has many kidnaps, whichLinking Words
Body paragraph 31
worried
parents a lot. The kidnappers take students to their private place by magic skills,Suggestion
Worried
Body paragraph 32
and
Suggestion
And
then
they make a phone call to parents to tell them give a big amount of money, orLinking Words
Body paragraph 33
their
children will die. The authorities should put Suggestion
Their
necessary measures
in place to secureSuggestion
the necessary measures
Body paragraph 34
schools
across the Suggestion
Schools
country
in view of the emerging security challenges.Use synonyms
Body paragraph 35
Finally
, gender equality, religion, and living areas are extremely useful to go alongLinking Words
Body paragraph 36
with
Suggestion
With
education
to get the equal studying environment. On Use synonyms
one
hand, the discriminationUse synonyms
Body paragraph 37
between
boys and girls in schools became a highlight issue around the 19th to the 20thSuggestion
Between
Body paragraph 38
century
. Now, there is likely to discriminate between the normal sex, and the homosexual.Suggestion
Century
Body paragraph 39
The LGBT-
les
, gay, bisexual, and transgender- is often known as a homosexual society,used to form the comparative of some adjectives and adverbs
less
Body paragraph 40
which
is mostly being discriminated by classmates, colleagues, family, and even teachers.Suggestion
Which
Body paragraph 41
“People would pound on the GSA doors, people would join to make fun of us,
Body paragraph 42
we
’d put up posters and they’d get written on and torn down,” said Ethan B., Suggestion
We
a
16-expresses position, direction or location, or point in time
at
Body paragraph 43
year
-old transgender boy in Texas. “We Suggestion
Year
complained but
the administration saidAccept comma addition
complained, but
Body paragraph 44
they
couldn’t do anything.”Suggestion
They
Body paragraph 45
The same-sex marriage is available in
US
nowadays. Suggestion
the US
However
, in many developingLinking Words
Body paragraph 46
countries
, homosexual people still have to face with a lot of harassments, andSuggestion
Countries
Body paragraph 47
discriminations
. It is not equal for them because every person on Suggestion
Discriminations
this
planet has the rightLinking Words
Body paragraph 48
to
live, go to Suggestion
To
school
, and grow up. Governments should have more consideration aboutUse synonyms
Body paragraph 49
the
rights for LGBT to be themselves like other people.Suggestion
The
Body paragraph 50
On
another hand
, the discrimination among religions Suggestion
the other hand
other hand
Linking Words
also need
Suggestion
also needs
taking
into aSuggestion
to take
Body paragraph 51
consideration
. Suggestion
Consideration
For
Linking Words
example
, the Catholicism, and the Buddhism attack each other becauseUse synonyms
Body paragraph 52
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of
different beliefs. Suggestion
Of
Moreover
, Linking Words
students
Suggestion
the students
also
afraid to talk with other friends in Linking Words
school
,Use synonyms
Body paragraph 54
who
has different beliefs because there may have some wars, if Suggestion
Who
one
person Use synonyms
accidentally
Suggestion
accidentally?
Body paragraph 55
talk
wrong things about their friends’ religion.Suggestion
Talk
Body paragraph 56
Furthermore
, The difference Linking Words
among
living areas is Suggestion
between
also
Linking Words
one
of the main factors makingUse synonyms
Body paragraph 57
war
. Most people from the urban do not like people, who come from the Suggestion
War
suburban
Suggestion
suburbs
Body paragraph 58
because
they think that they have no similarities.Suggestion
Because
Body paragraph 59
"When we started out we had a few whites in our area, but within a few years they
Body paragraph 60
all
moved outSuggestion
All
,
" said Lewis Anderson.Accept space
,
Body paragraph 61
"For us African Americans when we see a
group
of white people move to theUse synonyms
Body paragraph 62
neighborhood
we think that's good, we're cool with that. But for many whiteSuggestion
Neighbourhood
Neighborhood
Body paragraph 63
families
that's not the case - they start to get discouraged, they start to worry aboutSuggestion
Families
Body paragraph 64
the
property value and leave."Suggestion
The
Body paragraph 65
The discrimination between the black, and the white has been set up for a long time. They
Body paragraph 66
do
not want to live, work, or even talk Suggestion
Do
with
another. Kids Suggestion
to
always be
in Suggestion
are always being
this
situation, theyLinking Words
Body paragraph 67
are
always discriminated from another bigger Suggestion
Are
group
. Use synonyms
For
Linking Words
example
, some African studentsUse synonyms
Body paragraph 68
only
play together in the small Suggestion
Only
group
because they are not allowed to join in a whiteUse synonyms
Body paragraph 69
Use synonyms
group
. In Suggestion
Group
this
case, Raising citizen awareness is the thing Linking Words
that is
exceedingly urgent forLinking Words
Body paragraph 70
Use synonyms
one
Suggestion
One
country
to put it on top.Use synonyms
Body paragraph 71
To conclude, three above-mentioned aspects represent for all of the issues, which
Body paragraph 72
need
considering together by the government in order to reinforce the Suggestion
Need
country
. Use synonyms
Education
Use synonyms
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is
an extremely important and necessary for Suggestion
Is
one
Use synonyms
country
to strengthen it as much asUse synonyms
Body paragraph 74
possible
, but it has to go along with other aspects. “Together we can change the world”. IfSuggestion
Possible
Body paragraph 75
the
authority is Suggestion
The
unaffordable
to clarify these problems, there will come about impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
some
in the near future
soon
Conclusion
unexpected
situations in the future.Suggestion
Unexpected