Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages?
Firstly
, a social media website
can connects
people. My sister Mina lives in the Czech Republic and I can share my mother's birthday and my cousin's wedding pictures with her via Suggestion
can connect
facebook
. She would know that we are healthy and miss her very much. In old times it was impossible to connect people who lives at abroad. I remember that my aunt who lives in US could call only once or twice a year, because she could not afford the expensive international call fee. We missed her a lot, Suggestion
Facebook
therefore
we exchanged letters. However
the letters take long time
to get here. The problem is, you have to pay to make Suggestion
a long time
a
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an
intenational
phone call. Suggestion
international
International
Also you
need to pay for the stamps, and international stamps Accept comma addition
Also, you
are cost
a lot. For a social media Suggestion
cost
are costing
have cost
have costed
website
you don't need to pay anymore, if you are already paying for the internet and a lap top
or a smartphone.
a portable computer small enough to use in your lap
laptop
Secondly
, you can learn foreign
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a foreign language
foreign languages
language
more easily. Right now I am learning Czech language
to visit my sister Mina. I would stay for
her house for a while and I don't want to be a burden for her. Before 10 years Suggestion
in
ago it
was impossible to find a Accept comma addition
ago, it
language
exchange partner who speaks Czech in the South Korea. But right now I am having three language
partners from Czech who want to learn Korean. The Czech language
lesson takes a lot of money from me, therefore
I am happy that I can practice my Czech with my language
exchange partners. Now I am ready to order groceries from Czech supermarket
with Suggestion
the Czech supermarket
a Czech supermarket
Czech
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the Czech language
language
. If I did not have help from my language
partners, I could not do it. I took an advantges
of a social media the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
advantage
website
and could have those language
partners. Without a social media website
, I could not practice my Czech.
Thirdly
, your world could become wider. I know nobody from North Korea. The information of
North Korea is kind of Suggestion
about
on
confidential
in South Korea, you get only one Suggestion
confidence
view
- South Korean Goverment's
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Government's
Governments
view
on
it. I Suggestion
of
belived
that everything the accept as true; take to be true
believed
believe
goverment
told me is only one true fact. the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
However
, when I learned English and Chinese, I googled North Korea and found out that there are lots of different point
of Suggestion
points
view
of North Korea. I am not saying that our goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
view
is wrong. I'd like to know more information and different kind of viewpoint before I form my own opinion. With a social media website
, I could know lots of American's point of view
on North Korea, and it was very interesting. The sea of information is not only for political problems. I found out a pizza recipie
from the Naples and it tasted so great.
directions for making something
recipe
For
summary, I would like to point that a social media Suggestion
In
website
is affordable. It can work as free international phone or commnunity
board. And you can find a a group of people living in a particular local area
community
language
partner if you are learning a new language
. Lastly
, people can exchange various opinions about everything from political problems to
food Suggestion
with
recipie
.
directions for making something
recipes
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