Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is argued that one of the most essential school
subject
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subjects
is
History
. Some individuals ascertain that studying
History
is less important than Science and Technology. In my opinion, studying
History
is vital as well as studying other subjects.
To begin
with, there are three main reasons why teaching Science and Technology is more important.
Firstly
, it
is
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will be
more useful for students in the future because they can apply their studies in many different fields.
Secondly
, Science and Technology can help to change the world.
Therefore
, learners have numerous opportunities to contribute their research that can improve the world to become a better place.
Thirdly
, studying
History
may be boring and take a long time to memorize all the events that happened in the past.
Youngers
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Anglers
Rangers
may not understand why they have to study and how they are going to use
this
knowledge in the real life.
However
, choosing to study
History
in school
also
have several benefits.
History
can teach pupils know about their ancestors.
This
can explain what happens in the past and how they overcome their challenges.
For example
, students in Vietnam know their country suffered from many major wars in the past. There are millions of soldiers who passed away so younger generations can have a peaceful country. As a
results
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result
, students in Vietnam
have
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had
a duty to protect their nation like their ancestors have done in the past As far as I am concerned, studying
History
is necessary as studying other subjects. In conclusion,
although
Science and technology can help students have useful knowledge that they can change the world,
History
help pupils understand about the origin of their roots.
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