Some people say that using smartphones should be banned in most schools. Do you agree or disagree with that?

Nowadays, We have witnessed so

variety

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varied

the bombing of technology so the people have many chances to access to any smart

devices

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devices, for

for example

iPad, google glasses, laptop,

smartwatch

and typical is

smartphone

...

thus some

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Thus, some

Thus some

student

abuse it in

school

and it is said that

smartphone

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a smartphone

should be banned in

school

. In my opinion, the mobile phone should be prohibited in educational places. I think it brings to students more harmful things than benefits for learning which is distractions in the classroom, unsociable and

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in relationships with their friends

First

of all, it is undoubted that the

smartphone

makes people have more and more gap in relationships, mostly in friendship. I believe that when they have in hand a

smartphone which

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smartphone, which

smart phone which

is so convenient for lifting up their mood and unwind after long

school

time, certainly they will look intently at their

smartphone

and have a little chit-chat with someone by internet so it is the leading justification for less interaction with their friend. If I must opt between

smartphone

and outing with my friend when I am not on the go, maybe I will go to for my

smartphone

:)) because I just lay down in my bedroom and have no tiredness. The

secondly

obvious justification is that when they have the

smartphone

, they will be interrupted in learning because they all away think about the recreational game, apps for entertainment...

As a result

, they won't get any scores with flying colours. Another compelling reason for the idea is that they won't be alert to study anything Off the top of my head, the

smartphone

should be banned in

school but

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school, but

in some cases, the smart devices still help them study effectively and provide them with a golden environment to develop logical thinking and study any subject easily...If they use it reasonably It is undeniable that smartphones and some smart devices support the

student

to acquire knowledge more quickly than

traditional way

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the traditional way

and I think it is a new learning method helped studier in learning, it promotes the memory of

student

besides they

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besides, they

not only know more about

information

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the information

that they are learning by ebook but

also

they can track the progress of the lesson smoothly without textbook

moreover

allowing

student

to expand learning outside of the classroom.

Furthermore

, It prepares students for future work. Working with mobile devices will not only be a part of their everyday lives as adults, but it will

also

be a vital part of many career paths as well as knowing how to appropriately use mobile devices is an important aspect in

this

increasingly connected world and workforce.

Finally

, The

smartphone

gives

student

up-to-date learning,

in other words

, the old days of looking for information in encyclopedias are long

gone

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gone, therefore

therefore

having mobile devices in the classroom allows students instant access to the latest news, information, statistics, etc. Virtually every question they have is at their fingertips, keeping them connected with what’s going on around them and ensuring they are always well informed with the most up-to-date data in learning. To summarize, the

smartphone

supports them so numerous in training intelligence.

Nevertheless

, they

also

cause various problems in learning, especially addicted to the internet,

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or

introduces an alternative

Or

some decreases in educating, for

this

reason, it is said to bạn at educational accommodations. I advise that they should use them

logically and efficiently to

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logically and efficiently

get an immeasurable advantage in learning.