"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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"Prevention is better than cure". I somewhat disagree with the aforementioned notion in view of there are

inavitably

in such a manner as could not be otherwise

inevitably

inevitable

diseases in our life to treat at all the time and the money spent on

reasearch

systematic investigation to establish facts

research

and development of diseases will probably bring in effective heath protection methods. In the

first

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place, prevention is not always able to permanently stop illness. Wary as we are, we, once in our life,

undeliberately

Suggestion

fall ill.

Although

Linking Words

obey obey

Accept comma addition

obey, obey

our parents to bundle up, to turn off the fan, we eventually get a cold somehow. We are in an effort to avoid smoking and keep away from the

cigarettes

Suggestion

cigarette

smoke, but, with the ever-increasing air pollution, we may get lung cancer. Prevention can provide us a healthy life with less

illness but

Accept comma addition

illness, but

, anyway, it

can not

cannot

invariably ensure a disease-free world. It is an undeniable fact that researching and developing medicines

plays

Suggestion

play

a vital role in reducing and stopping illness. Ailments are solely treated easily when we clearly catch on their causes. Many scientists have been working on some characteristic ailments like, to take one example, heart attack and,

consequently

Linking Words

, some effective ways to avoid it have been discovered,

for instance

Linking Words

, working out frequently, going on a healthy diet, avoiding being shocked.

As a result

Linking Words

heart attack

Suggestion

the heart attack

ealier

earlier in time; previously

earlier

time was apparently

ine

used of a single unit or thing; not two or more

one

of the most perilous ailments, which killed many unlucky people, but it is no longer as dangerous as it used to be. The amount of money spent on researching and developing medicines might be a lot,

however

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, it can lead to the discovery of many new efficient treating and preventing methods In brief, prevention is not always a good way to keep people safe from ailments. We should invest more into researching and developing medicines for

further

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future.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

7.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

297 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

proactive
preventive measures
lifestyle diseases
public health
healthcare expenditure
cost-effective
chronic conditions
early detection
immunization
health promotion
risk factors
non-communicable diseases
disease surveillance
preventive diagnostics
health literacy
universal healthcare
primary prevention
secondary prevention
tertiary prevention

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"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventive measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

some people think that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factor, such as momey and appearance. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

task 2: in some countries, young people have become richer, healthier anf live longer, but they are less happy. What are the causes? What can be done to address this situation?

Some people believe that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, believe that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In some cities, public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own food and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?