Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, while the number of the population in the world is increasing, there is a big demand for constructing new buildings that will have a purpose of living or working
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on
it. Some people consider the function as more crucial aspect for planning to build a building than its outside
style
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, in the process of designing and
construction
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constructing
a building, engineers and architects usually disagree on the important statements, whether is
functionality
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or
design
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more important. On the one hand, buildings are built because of its
functionality
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, schools are constructed so children could attend and
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educate them
, libraries are made for studying and borrowing books, while malls are built for shopping and spending time. The purpose is always the main reason why someone
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wants
to build, and without that, people would not plan a constructing of a building. What is more, without its
functionality
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, there would not be
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design
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designed
or
style
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that determines a building.
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, many people consider a building important because of its usage and not
style
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.
On the other hand
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, buildings'
design
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could be crucial for visual impression. People appreciate
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,
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it
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as museums, parliaments or other public institutions.
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design
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the design
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of
buildings is
representation
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represented
of
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the city's style
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and culture,
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that impression is crucial of attracting tourists or investors.
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, allowing architects to
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a building will encourage them to dedicate to project and to invest all creativity and effort, which can result as amazing building. In conclusion, both opinions have advantages. I consider
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as more crucial that
design
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because
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the building
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is made
for its purpose and function.
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, people care more about its usage that
style
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • aesthetics
  • functionality
  • architectural integrity
  • practicality
  • usability
  • form versus function
  • cost efficiency
  • user-centric design
  • cultural value
  • emotional impact
  • architectural landmark
  • tourism appeal
  • practical design features
  • maintenance costs
  • safety considerations
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