Some people believe that when designing a building, the most important thing to be considered is the function rather than the outward appearance. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, while the number of the population in the world is increasing, there is a big demand for constructing new buildings that will have a purpose of living or working
in
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on
it. Some people consider the function as more crucial aspect for planning to build a building than its outside
style
.
Moreover
, in the process of designing and
construction
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constructing
a building, engineers and architects usually disagree on the important statements, whether is
functionality
or
design
more important. On the one hand, buildings are built because of its
functionality
.
For instance
, schools are constructed so children could attend and
educate in them
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educate them
, libraries are made for studying and borrowing books, while malls are built for shopping and spending time. The purpose is always the main reason why someone
want
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wants
to build, and without that, people would not plan a constructing of a building. What is more, without its
functionality
, there would not be
design
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designed
or
style
that determines a building.
Moreover
, many people consider a building important because of its usage and not
style
.
On the other hand
, buildings'
design
could be crucial for visual impression. People appreciate
style
,
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perceive by sight or have the power to perceive by sight
see
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UT
it
but
could be important for facilities that want attention,
such
as museums, parliaments or other public institutions.
Additionally
,
design
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the design
on
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of
buildings is
representation
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represented
of
city's
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the city's style
style
and culture,
hence
that impression is crucial of attracting tourists or investors.
Furthermore
, allowing architects to
design
a building will encourage them to dedicate to project and to invest all creativity and effort, which can result as amazing building. In conclusion, both opinions have advantages. I consider
functionality
as more crucial that
design
because
building
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the building
are made
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is made
for its purpose and function.
Additionally
, people care more about its usage that
style
.
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