Research shows that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

It is true that business meetings and trainings via the Internet has gained enormous popularity in recent years.
Although
this
has some drawbacks, I concur that the benefits should be paid more attention to. On the one hand, there are some drawbacks when people have business meetings, discussions and studies through
Internet
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the Internet
. The most transparent problem is that
people lack
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people, lack
of personal contacts. While individuals cannot observe the body languages or facial expressions of their counterparts, they are easily able to misunderstand at some points in online meeting or training
seasons
a meeting for execution of a group's functions
sessions
.
In addition
, the signal of internet devices may be interrupted at any
time
which cause by unexpected reasons.
As a result
, it
waste
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wastes
time
and energy of people
then
become an ineffective meetings or trainings.
On the other hand
, I am convinced that the advantages of virtual meetings are more significant. The
first
one is that online meetings and online classes help people save virtual
time
and money consuming, which are absolutely practical. If people want to hold face-to-face meetings, they not only have to spend
time
for a long
trip but
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trip, but
also
struggle with expenditure for the venue and facilities. The
second
advantage is thanks to
Internet
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the Internet
, economic and education of each country can remarkably develop because individuals can contact with each others from everywhere in the world. Online meetings can help enterprises cooperate with foreign companies without any obstacles while online classes will be the best choice for people who want to experience oversea education but do not have
eligible
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eligibility
for studying abroad. In conclusion, while meetings and studies via
Internet
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the Internet
have some certain disadvantages, I agree that people should conduct it for a lot of transparent perks.
Submitted by Thanh on

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