Some people think it is better to give donations to local charitable organizations, while others choose to give to national or international bodies. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

These days, donating money to the needy is a humanitarian activity that has been embraced by individuals around the world.

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some people deem that donors should do charity straight to the local community, my conviction is that it would be better to support

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national or international charitable foundations. On the one hand, a number of philanthropists opt to directly give financial support or contributions of tangible items to the local funds. The reason is that local charities have a better understanding of their locality’s demands and local context via hands-on conversation with suffered people.

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, knowing the issue of

fresh water

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deficits in

south western

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Vietnam, local foundations prioritize

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water supply

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stations

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instead

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of

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expansion.

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, people who give donations to local

charity

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are aware of their social responsibility

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local

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community where they live or work.

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means that they often give direct donations to local

organizations

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to draw the public’s attention in the local area.

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, I argue that donors should prefer to provide help or support national or international

organizations

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.

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,

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is because international charities are major

organizations

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which could provide financial and human resources to aid in emergencies

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as epidemics,

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or man-made disasters,

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long-term planning. The World

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Organization,

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, not only released one million

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from its emergency fund but

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mobilized a number of doctors to address the outbreaks

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of the Ebola virus in Africa, which is impossible for local

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.

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,

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of funds is becoming an issue of broad interest in fundraisers.

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, it is harder for officials or international charities to embezzle funds from contributors because they are under

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scrutiny and subject to the laws of various nations. In conclusion, in my opinion, national or international charitable

organizations

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are still preferable to local ones

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the above reasons.