Many students have to study subjects which they do not like. Some people think this is a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Most of People go to
school
for at least 10 years of their life and spend a huge amount of
time
there. In the
school
, there are many subjects and some of them are not really interesting. Some people believe that spend many years in the
school
to learn about the
subject
they do not like is wasting their
time
. In my opinion I
am not agree
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don't agree
do not agree
have not agreed
with
this
statement because of two reasons.
First
, some subjects might be
boring but
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boring, but
they teach important skills and
knowdlege
the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning
knowledge
for living and working. I believe every
subject
in
school
are
choosen
one who is the object of choice; who is given preference
chosen
choosing
carefully and thoroughly by a group of wise people. These people take into account the requirement for future workforce and the skills people should have to perform work well in order to build education programs for student.
For example
, my primary
school
started teaching me about computing when my country was having machine revolution at the same
time
.
This
computing skills
was
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were
critical for studying and working in the 21
century which
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century, which
my primary
school
had
acknowdlege
recognized or made known or admitted
acknowledged
and would prepare the best for their student.
Second
, people might not like the
subject
at the
first
time but
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time, but
when they know more they will find it more interesting.
Thing
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The thing
takes
time
to understand and love.
For example
, my sister did not like to play piano in her aged seven.
However
, after one year spending in music class, playing piano is becoming her
first
favourite habit. It
also
brings lots of happiness moment for her and people around her. In conclusion, it is not right to say that study something you not like is a waste of
time
. People will find
subject
worth learning and brings some benefit for them in the future.
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