Every year an increasing number of students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits of this development outweigh the problems associated with it?

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The past twenty years have seen a dramatic change of the number of students who go abroad

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college in China. In

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essay, I will explore the advantages and disadvantages of

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trend. On the one hand, both students and their country can benefit from

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trend.

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, students can choose more suitable education methods for themselves because there are more options. The course and teaching methods are quite different from China. According to foreign experts, the higher education in China is really not

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good, as

that of those developing countries, especially

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with

Europian

of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe

European

or US.

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, people can improve their foreign language, but, they can contact with others when they are in a foreign country, and they will quickly master the foreign language.

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, it helps to promote the mutual understanding between their

mother land

the country where you were born

motherland

and their destination countries. These students exchange information with the locals. Students can get

better understanding

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a better understanding

of the destination countries. People in their home country will get more vivid information about other countries through these messages.

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, the locals

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can get more clear recognition about other countries.

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, there are disadvantages too.

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, it costs people a lot of money

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college in foreign countries. Many families have to take out all their savings to support their children to go abroad.

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, some students cannot stand the big difference of the new environment, they maybe quit their study and come back home. To conclude, given the

undisputable

not open to question; obviously true

indisputable

fact that

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college in foreign countries helps students with their studies and promotes the mutual understanding between countries, even if there are some drawbacks, I think the benefits outweigh the problems.

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Every year an increasing number of students choose to go to another country for their higher education. Do you think the benefits of this development outweigh the problems associated with it?

Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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