In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

With the increasing of many criminal activities in public area, Camera surveillance has been adopted as an effective way to reduce

crime rate

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the crime rate

in many places around the

world

. It has been argued that

although

these devices help fight back against unwanted crimes and increase the level of securities, some people still believe that their personal privacy have been violated. In my own point of view, the

advatanges

the quality of having a superior or more favorable position

advantages

do outweigh the

disadvanatages

the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

disadvantages

disadvantage

for these below reasons. Personal freedom or privacy is considered to be one of the require rights for citizens of countries around the

world

. In some part of the

world

, Government agencies are

forbiden

excluded from use or mention

forbidden

from taking photos of each individual without permission. One of the problems that cameras bring to people is that there is no guarantee that personal data about our

behaviors

manner of acting or controlling yourself

behaviours

and activities is kept away from

third

party agencies. The number of hack activities aiming at local

authorities

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authority

information storage facilities is increasing tremendously without any proper measurement to due

with

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to

. Our personal data might be sold to advertising agencies, hackers for the purpose of establishing marketing strategies or scam actions.

For example

, one of the facilities in China which responsible for keeping data from

survillance

close observation of a person or group (usually by the police)

surveillance

cameras was hacked by

annonymous

having no known name or identity or known source

anonymous

who

then

later sold

these information

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this information

to

third

party agencies.

On the other hand

, video recording devices play a crucial role in the

world

today as to

elimate

terminate, end, or take out

eliminate

alienate

any risks of being attacked by terrorism and tracking criminal who is hiding from the police. Paris and London are two

citites

the combined stakes of the betters

kitties

that were suffered

servely

to a severe or serious degree

severely

damages from recent terrorist actions. As a way to maintain security and order in public or tourist attractions, cameras have been established which prove to be extremely effective in fighting against

these crime

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these crimes

this crime

.

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Another

benefit would be that video cameras can help

police department

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police departments

uncover many hiding criminals by using AI in video analysing.

This

benefit helped Chinese police to capture a criminal who has been hiding from authorities for almost 20 years. In conclusion,

although

our personal freedom might be violated due to the establishing of

videos

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video

recording devices,

this

method

help

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helps

us to stay safe from unwanted crimes or any actions by terrorists. In my personal view,

this

technology gadgets

Accept comma addition

technology, gadgets

offer benefits that

are outweigh

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outweigh

have outweighed

its disadvantages respectively.