Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? What are the effects on society and family life?

In recent years, many young people refuse to become mothers or fathers as soon as
older generation
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the older generation
did in the past.
This
come
Suggestion
comes
with
variety
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a variety
of reasons and contribute to some positive changes in our society and future families.
Firstly
, people want to concentrate on their career path in order to build a strong foundation for their kids in the future.
This
means that in spite of being busy with both earning money and taking care of children at once, they choose to focus on
one
thing at a time. Thanks to that, their children will be well-prepared before coming to
life
.
Secondly
, some people claim that they want to extend their free
life
to explore the world before being attached to a family. These people usually own an adventurous personality and appreciate an independent
life
.
For example
,
one
of my friends who is working as a tour guide at age 35 said that if she had a child, she would have to change her interesting job to another stable
one
, which seems so difficult for her at the moment.
This
trend of
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
will bring some positive effects for our society. Employees will be more productive because there will be no barrier bother them working towards their own targets.
Besides
, they
also
have time to take part in many community activities outside the office
such
as becoming a volunteer teacher or organizing a regular science club.
This
will lead to the result that after having children, these people not only
tent
have a tendency or disposition to do or be something; be inclined
tend
to spend more time to raise their
kids but
Accept comma addition
kids, but
also
have more interesting experiences to share with them than the younger
one
. In conclusion, people todays choose to have children later in
life
in order to achieve the best times for both themselves and their future children.
Besides
,
this
also
contributes some clear benefits to improve our society.
Submitted by Thanh on

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