The % of overweight children in Weston countries has increased by 20% in last 10 years. Discuss the cause and effects of disturbing trend?
Now a days
, children in foreign countries Suggestion
Nowadays
has increased
their weight 20% as compared to Suggestion
have increased
last
10 years, it has many causes and effects that are discuses in the following a paragraphs
.
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paragraph
To begin
with, obesity has many causes like junk foods, overeating and frequency of eating that increase the body fat. Mostly children are couch potatoes and prefer to eat spicy food rather than homemade food that are unhygienic
, it
effects on their physical fitness. it is
it's
Moreover youth
attracted towards the indoor activities like video game, internet surfing, chatting that make them lazy, fatigue and Accept comma addition
Moreover, youth
weak
. If they started outdoor activity Suggestion
weakness
then
their body fat and calories will be burn
due to body movement. Suggestion
burned
burnt
Moreover
, parents are also
responsible for their children. If they guide and encouraged their son and daughter for outdoor activities and avoid fast food become
healthy life.
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becoming
Furthermore
, one of the other main reasons is diseases like asthma, blood pressure, diabetes, thyroid, insulin. These problems give invitation to overweight. Patients who suffer these problems do not work and exercises properly so they have more chance to gain weight. Few disease are
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is
heredity
, it Suggestion
hereditary
transfer
one generation to Suggestion
transfers
next
so they have few chance
to control them because genetic problem defiantly Suggestion
chances
day
by day
.
In conclusion, I recapitulate my views that overweight problem increase day
by day
that have dangerous effect
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dangerous effects
a dangerous effect
of
our health. Teacher and parents teach the adults and kids about the effects of obesity. If government should provide the gym, Suggestion
on
health fitness
facilities to the students in school level Accept comma addition
health, fitness
then
we will overcome it.
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