Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.

Visiting countries
has become
Suggestion
have become
a recent and popular trend that allows people to experience some new thing
such
as trying different food or sightseeing cultural monuments. While some people claim that
travelers
a person who changes location
travellers
should obey to the
host
's
culture
and their habits, others consider accepting international differences important. On the one hand, once someone said: "When in Rome, do as the Romans do." That actually means to accept the local heritage, traditions and behaviours as ours while staying at a particular place.
Firstly
, in order to be a real
traveler
a person who changes location
traveller
, you should follow local customs and behaviours.
Additionally
, just reverse
situation
Suggestion
the situation
and imagine yourself as a
host
, the
first
thing that you would appreciate is the respect that
visitor
Suggestion
the visitor
has shown to your
culture
.
Secondly
, while accepting
host
's cuisine and habits,
traveler
Suggestion
travellers
traveller
the traveller
a traveller
can achieve
quality knowledge
Accept comma addition
quality, knowledge
and get unique experience that will remind them on particular trip.
Lastly
, trying new things and following local traditions make us better people.
On the other hand
, hosts should
also
have a respect for visitors'
culture
and behaviour. Nowadays, differences are usual and since many people travel regularly, all cultures and behaviours are combining and interacting on
regular basis
Suggestion
a regular basis
.
Moreover
, many people live in foreign countries and local citizens have accepted their traditions. What is more, not everybody are
comfort
Suggestion
comfortable
with trying different food or accepting other religions because of the respect to their own
culture
. In conclusion, both statements have advantages. In my opinion, if someone wants to travel, they have to accept
host
's behaviour and follow their traditions. In order to gain an amazing experience from a trip, visitors should try local things
such
as food.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users