Many people believe that media coverage of celebrities is having a negative effect on children. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Due to the development of mass media
as televisions and the internet, celebrities can now reach a wider range of audiences and kids are not an exemption. In that sense, many believe that
scenario can have detrimental effects on children. In my opinion, I agree with
claim and the reason for
will be discussed in
essay. A plethora of celebrities promotes certain beauty and personality standards
the media. Since modern media
almost everything about
lifestyle, their influence on certain aspects
as beauty standards can reach sensitive audiences
as children.
As a result
, many youths will force themselves to imitate their idols to fit
the celebrities' traditional criteria of beauty even though it has negative impacts on them.
For example
, children in the Philippines sometimes wear revealing clothes even though it is not appropriate and they do these kinds of actions because it is what they see on media outlets which broadcasts famous people
In addition
, media coverage of celebrities can create drawbacks when these kinds of people commit inappropriate actions
as sexual
a lack of politeness; a failure to show regard for others; wounding the feelings or others
and violent
manner of acting or controlling yourself
. Since these prominent people are influential, they can give children a reason to
commit unsuitable acts.
For instance
, after the media release the news about a famous
man in who
man who
commits sexual acts against a girl, there has been some records in which children recreate similar events based on what has been broadcast. To sum it all up,
media coverage of celebrities is common nowadays, there are drawbacks in specific audiences
as children. Since the young don't have enough maturity and experience, they can be easily influenced by what they see in different media outlets
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