People sleep less than before in many countries. Why do people sleep less? What effect does it have on an individually and on society?

Nowdays
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Nowadays
, people from all over the
world
get less sleep hours than ever before.
This
essay aims at explaining why people get less sleep and what are the repercussions of
this
new trend
on
Suggestion
of
for
individuals and
society
as well. People sleep less generally
becouse
for the reason that; on account of
because
they live in a more competitive than ever before
society
. In
order
to keep up with the
everchanging
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ever changing
eviroment
, people need to spend as much time as
posible
capable of happening or existing
possible
to interact with the
world
around them in
order
to
absorbe
become imbued
absorb
absorbed
as much information as humanly
posible
capable of happening or existing
possible
. Some say the information is power, so they need it to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
their goals in
this
competitive
world
we live in.
For
example in
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example, in
order
to be one of the best in your field, depending on the field, you'll have to train or read very hard, and more importantly harder that your competition, and
this
could only be done if you have more time,
thus
people tend to sleep less that one may get more time for training. The impact on an individual is a faster rate development process, but at cost. Less sleep can come with
health
disorders, and sometimes if the lack of sleep is considerable these
health
problems will be
severe especially
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severe, especially
if they are associated with
streess
the relative prominence of a syllable or musical note (especially with regard to stress or pitch)
stress
, fast food and no
exrercise
the activity of exerting your muscles in various ways to keep fit
exercise
.
Moreover
, the
society
can't
only but
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only, but
be affected by having to deal with
this
extra
health
problmes
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
, more money from
guverment
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the government
government
being needed to pay the hospitals and doctors that treat these
pacients
a person who requires medical care
patients
.
However
the
society
can benefit from people trying to
achive
to gain with effort
achieve
more by helping it develop more, by making life easier for everybody throughout their
achivements
the action of accomplishing something
achievements
achievement
. In conclusion people choose to sleep less because we live in a more competitive than ever
before
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before, the world
before the world
world
, where we have to keep up with other people in
order
to
succed
attain success or reach a desired goal
succeed
in completing our goals,
this
coming with
health
problmes
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
and higher costs for the
society
to treat them but the price we pay
outweights
be heavier than
outweighs
the benefits of a
continusly
at every point
continuously
continually
improving
society
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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