Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems.

Traffic congestion and
pollution
have become global issues.
However
, it is possible to control these problems by escalating the cost of fuel. I totally agree with
this
because money is a factor which influence the most in many situations There are many benefits of raising rates of petrol. Due to high rates nobody will want to buy private cars. People will use local transport for long
distance
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distance, such
such
as buses
,
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,
trains, ship or air planes, and short distance will be covered by bicycle.
This
will help a lot
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with
declining traffic burden, daily accidents and noise
pollution
. Occurrence of accident will decrease
,
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,
due to high prices less automobiles will be on
road
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the road
and there will be easy for government to control accidents and mishaps on roads. Contamination of atmosphere with impurities will be minimized by setting up high prices of vehicle
oils
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
is
. Due to use of less fuel emission of carbon monoxide will be reduced. Environment defence fund estimates that on-road vehicles are the cause of one-
third
of the air
pollution
.
Therefore
, we have to take
few
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little
steps to combat
this
,
otherwise
, we will pay
huge amount
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huge amounts
a huge amount
.About 200 tons of impurities in just 12 square
meter
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meters
is noted
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are noted
.These gases not only
effect
have an effect upon
affect
oue
of or belonging to us
our
achosystem but
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ecosystem, but
ecosystem but
ecosystems but
also
human
help forexample
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help, for example
help for example
, patient of respiratory track has increased due to uncontrolled gases emitted from road vehicles. To conclude, it is recommended that government shoul
d ri
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raise
se the price of fuel to get rid of all problems caused by traffic and there must be proper rules and regulation regardin
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the number
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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